| Reviews for Truth Beneath the Lies |
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Jaz-147 chapter 4 . 5/10/2012 pls upload soon. |
purged-account1 chapter 4 . 7/11/2011 It's a very interesting idea. I can't wait for the next update! |
Alyxsandria chapter 4 . 7/11/2011 holy shit! why have i not seen this awesome au fanfic before? don't worry, i won't let it slip passed me anymore. all i have to say is good job. it's nice to see an au trying to incorporate some stuff from the manga. glad your trying to keep to the host clubs roots. also, good job for a pretty original plot. your doing a nice blend between the two seperate stories. can't wait for the next update! |
theglasseslover chapter 4 . 7/11/2011 Oh wow Haruhi isn't making a very good impression on Kyouya now is she? Well he'll warm up to her (if the OT3 is anything to go by). I can feel the plot thickening. Kaoru obviously has something important to tell Haruhi. I can't wait to see what it is. And Tamaki, at the supermarket! That's gunna be an interesting next chapter for sure (with more Hunny-senpai in it I hope). Update soon please :D |
hunnylover chapter 4 . 7/11/2011 oh course tamaki would do that XD i enjoy reading this keep up the good work and im glad u use the dog in the end! poor hikaru virtual hug for him and wat about mori and hunny i wonder wat ther souls are hunny should be a dear they are cute and freindly but protective and the males can get agressive! Mori should be a snake silent untoticed but deadly but can stil be colorful! |
ookamikagemiko chapter 3 . 6/22/2011 I think you are doing a wonderful job Draycos. I am so glad to see that you have updated. I was getting a little worried! You are doing very well with your grammar, just watch out on the word past. You keep putting in pasted. :) Just a small grammar correction. Looking forward to the next installment!:Wolf |
theglasseslover chapter 3 . 6/20/2011 This story is so brilliant. Of course, you should already know this, since only a brilliant person could write such an amazing fanfic. I can't wait to see exactly what kind of trouble Haruhi has gotten herself in with the Shadow King (since it seemed liked she lied about her gunmanship in her resume). You should update soon, ne :) |
Copyrightdragon chapter 3 . 6/14/2011 OMG! I love this story, it's such a great concept! Just a question though: Are Hunny and Mori included in the story? I just can't get the thought of Hunny with a bunny (hey, that rhymed!) Soul outta my head! XD It's so fitting! It would be kinda cool if they were, like, combat specialists for the WRB who were sent to rescue Haruhi after Hikaru sees her and escapes, thinking she's been captured, or turned or whatever, and Hunny and Mori get sent in and wind up exposing the whole thing! XD I can see the look on Hunny's face, crying: "So, you're not evil Haru-chan?" "Wait, CHAN? You mean she's a girl?" XD Anyway, great story, and I hope you update soon, and often! :) |
TallestBlue chapter 3 . 6/10/2011 Ah! This is such a great story so far! Normally I can never find AU stories that interest me but this works so well! Please update as soon as you can, I can't wait to see what happens! |
ForgetMeNotViolet chapter 2 . 2/16/2011 so, i know you haven't done this in forever...but it's really good! can you continue? |
romancelvr25 chapter 2 . 1/9/2011 somebody needs to update this soon or else! This is a great story! it reminds me of Mistress of Deception which unfortunately hasnt been updated either! I think its a really well written story keep it up! I think Tamaki's should be a dog or even something small like a mouse. A dog because Tamaki is loyal and like dogs is kinda bipolar. Really happy and then get into his growing mushroom stage ya know? Where Kyoya is talking he is talking to his dad right? And is the Rose Brigade and same as the White Rose Brigade? That is kinda confusing...but UPDATE! ASAP! |
DREAMLYN-LA-DY-BUG chapter 2 . 8/31/2010 This is so intresting! For Tamaki's soul i was thinking a little cat! LOL thats just my thinking. Cant wait till next chapter! XD |
YelloMarker chapter 2 . 8/28/2010 Tamaki's should be either a gerbil or a bear (like his doll )! And kyoya's a garuda or phoenix. Or a crow, if you want it less grand. :D |
ookamikage chapter 2 . 7/20/2010 PLEASE update soon! And longer chappies too! Tamaki's soul...hmm how aboout a brightly plummaged bird? Colorful but intelligant? |
ookamikage chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 wow! you definatly have me hooked! Cant wait to read more |