| Reviews for Beyond the Horizon |
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LoveMusicRain chapter 11 . 5/26/2015 I absolutely love this! You did a great job capturing Edward's "mopiness" without making him annoying. That's very difficult to find in EPOV fanfictions. You have a gift for writing, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you in the future. |
yeh1gyahoo.com chapter 11 . 1/12/2015 It's 2015 and I am a really slow starter as far as the Twilight Saga goes. In 2014 I read all the books, bought the movies so I could watch them at my leisure. Finally I came upon Fanfiction. I know within a few minutes if I am going to like the story or not. I like your story, "Beyond The Horizon!" Thank you for writing it. |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 11 . 11/19/2014 I really did love the way you stayed true the story even within your additions. Amazing job! I love this swoon worthy ending! |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 10 . 11/18/2014 It was fun to see Edward and Emmett. |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 9 . 11/18/2014 Correction of my last post: It was nice to see the man INSIDE Edward that wants more from Bella but is still a gentleman. ) I like the original chapter. Edward is quite the over thinker and masochistic. Great job! |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 8 . 11/18/2014 "If you stay, I don't need heaven." Heaven. What was it, after all, but a state of utter bliss and grace? Wherever she was. Maybe that was the only heaven I would get. Maybe it was the only one I would ever, ever need. This is AMAZING! I love how Edward finally begins to right himself here. Great job with the extra at the end of the chapter too. It was nice to see the man instead Edward that wants more from Bella but is still a gentleman. ) |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 7 . 11/18/2014 So democratic...nice job. Poor Emmett! |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 6 . 11/18/2014 You did awesome! Spot on I think. |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 5 . 11/18/2014 I think Edward learned many important lessons about Bella's love and commitment along with a better sense of right and wrong. Loved this chapter! |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 4 . 11/17/2014 Love that last line! Nice chapter, |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 3 . 11/17/2014 Good call on changing Alice's vision. |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 2 . 11/17/2014 Nice job with the interactions with the Voultori. |
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 1 . 11/16/2014 Nice job showing Edward's emotional change from wallowing to contentment to desperate determination! |
Shawna9301 chapter 11 . 12/9/2013 This was great. |
l chapter 11 . 10/25/2013 Wow I'm surprised u don't have more reviews! That was the best fic ever! Keep on writing ! l |