Dude, I don't know where you pulled that Spider-Man stuff and other stuff out of but I gotta tell y'all. THAT IS FREAKING AWE~SOME!. I mean seriously *crying* I love you soooooooooo much right now whatever your plans are DON'T stop doing such beeeaauuuuuutiful work. *dabs tears with a hanky* you are totally my favorite BF right now. And don't forget to keep up the good works.

thanks for the read, I really enjoyed this. I started reading your stories oh like 10 years ago but I hadnt read anything in this fandom in quite some time when your updates on the daily buzz inspired me to get back into it. are you still planning on writing the sequel to this?

No matter how many times I read this I will never not think that not bringing Jazz back was a mistake. He should be here because I think you all would write him so well. I was always so very deeply looking forward to hearing him in a Botosphere story. I sincerely hope you will reconsider. I loved reading him in Masks. I adore him in Turning Point. I think reading him in a Botosphere production would be the pinnacle in a trifecta of awesomely written stories. Please please pleeeeease reconsider! Pretty please with whipped cream and a dusting of it’s about slagging time shimmer sugar on top! I always skip these chapters about the failed attempt because they make me frustrated and depressed all at once. Give some love to the Jazz-meister!

so awesome

I’m sad the other story hasn’t been posted yet, but I’m so excited to see this one finished. I hope you have ease for every word you write.

Omg. O.o I can't think of a worse fate than being 'overwritten.' This is terrifying. This is amazing. Beautiful, heart-wrenching, deep.

That was a hell of a speech. It was beautiful.

10/10

“dear in the headlights of a very annoyed truck” is one of the best sentences I have ever read. I adore this story and have read it many times and was wondering who’d you're going to be posting the sequel. Anyway love this regardless, I wish there were more stories like this.

Hello! Thank you for an interesting fanfiction! I really enjoyed the previous part. I have only one remark about Russian surnames. There is a difference between male and female surnames that end with -v. For instance, Berdyaev should change into Berdyaeva for females. At least that way it would sound Russian.

Honestly, I thought I was trash for sinking low enough to read Transformers fanfiction, but I was apparently wrong because this sequel (and it’s prequel) are literally the opposite of trash like omg they are so good! Thanks so much for writing this!

Are you still working on the sequel. I absolutely love this story and have read more then twenty times at this point. I cant find any stories like this and its a little disappointing no kne else has written about a brother bond between Optimus and Sam making me love this story even more. Well done

Thank you for this amazing story! I can't wait to read the next one! You did amazing with all the details and it felt like I was there with them.

Ohmygosh! Did you just make a twilight reference with isle esme or did that come from somewhere else?

THE PART WHERE JUDY SAYS SHE'LL KILL OPTIMUS AND HE PANICS IS MY FAVORITE PART OF THIS CHAPTER. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THAT HE TAKES THAT AT COMPLETE FACE VALUE, THAT'S SO OPTIMUS I JUST LOVE IT.