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I love you. :D

That was just perfect. I can't think of anything else to say.

"its bitter taste soaking into my already black stepped towards me" I think you missed a few words out between black and stepped. And don't even try the 3 AM card XD

Anyway, grammer whoring out of the way.

I think this is the first fic of yours I've read. I really liked the language use, and minimalist use of dialogue. Big chunks of writing is good stuff X3