| Reviews for Forgiveness, Txoa |
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   Xieloviere 27 chapter 2 . 6/12 The writing is super good! Awesome work already! |
| Gravity012 chapter 26 . 5/1 I mean... Mia didn’t really know what was going to happen until now. And Tsu’tey knows this cuz, ya know, he saw her memories. So, him getting all mad at her doesn’t make a whole lot of sense. |
| Gravity012 chapter 8 . 4/30 The relationship between Mia and Tsu’tey is developing waaaaaay too fast. It’s the second time he’s seen her and they almost kissed? |
| Gravity012 chapter 4 . 4/30 I was kind of hoping for some differences, not just the movie with an additional character. I’ll keep reading it though, it’s still good. |
| Gravity012 chapter 3 . 4/30 Love it so far! |
| Gravity012 chapter 1 . 4/30 Good so far. Character didn’t seem to Mary sueish to me. A few grammar and spelling problems here and there. But other than that I loved it! |
| Serena chapter 42 . 1/26 What a beautiful story, thank you for the read :) |
| Siera-Knightwalker chapter 42 . 12/29/2019 Sorry to say but I skipped a couple of chapters... I mean, you write really well but cheating just puts me off like nothing ever does. So... Yeah. I basically know what happened anyway. I wish you had gone a bit more off canon but that's kinda hard to do when the whole plot would break but I kinda wished she would do more in the story... But palulukan rider was a really cool thing to introduce. I liked that! Anyway, great story. I see why people like it. Would you mind if I took some inspiration from your story and create one of my own? Cause there are some stuff j think I might end up including. Great work! |
| Siera-Knightwalker chapter 4 . 12/27/2019 Okay. That's ridiculous. What does she even like?! She doesn't like animals, water, flying. |
| Siera-Knightwalker chapter 3 . 12/27/2019 I actually feel really bad for Jake now... But I guess that's understandable. Poor guy... |
| Siera-Knightwalker chapter 2 . 12/27/2019 Wow. You liked off do many people she knew.. Honestly, it was just bad luck. I'm surprised toy didn't just break her after her brother's death. But it's pretty interesting and I, like everyone, love Tsu'tey |
| ss chapter 29 . 11/4/2019 You did not notice that grace was naked but in vines? |
| 1119483929 chapter 42 . 10/12/2019 This was an amazing story, loved every second of it. |
| fanficfanatic711 chapter 2 . 4/17/2019 I love this this is the second time I’ve read this wonderful job |
| Mister Pretentious chapter 4 . 3/1/2019 Lost me here, sorry. From other reviews it sounds like it turns out to be a wonderful story, but as of now Mia has just been an extra character with no actual impact on the story, and occasionally takes Jake's dialogue and actions. Was really hoping the story was going to explore Jake getting separated from Mia, after the whole confrontation with the jaguar type thing. |
