yes i really think you're that mean. I actually though Kotone was dead until she said something because apparently "me" and "my" don't exist.

AAAAAaaaaaaaa this was good though. I found the ending satisfying and the characters were cool. It was nice seeing how Asa developed. I don't hate him (that much) now he is small lost boy.

Oh man, I've spent the entire evening today reading some of your multichaptered SoulSilverShipping stories that I had read 3-4 years ago but by now almost completely forgotten the content of, (honestly, I can't believe it has been so long? I also reread Stockholm before this story but I'm not really gonna talk about that since I am reviewing THIS story, not Stockholm haha) and man, this was such a great read. I actually don't remember if I reviewed when I first read this so I hope I didn't because otherwise I won't be able to post this review...

But anyway, I don't know if it's just that my past self forgot about almost all of the angst in this story or if back when I read this story (and Stockholm too, to be honest) I rushed through it missing most of the details, but wow, I had forgotten most of the angst that happened. Not that it's bad, I can always appreciate a dose of angst. Besides, it makes the story much better too, especially when reading the epilogue. It's just so much more rewarding to get that amount of fluff after all of the angst. Especially after the 16th chapter, I mean, when it switched to Silver's POV I knew shit was going down. (and can I just say, Silver's line about how Kotone can be his girlfriend if she wakes up, MY POOR HEART WHAT HAVE YOU DONE)

I just generally wanted to review to thank you for this fic and your other SoulSilverShipping works cause I had forgotten how much I really loved these two so it was nice to spend an evening reading all the fics I've read so long ago that rereading them almost felt like reading a fic that I hadn't ever read before! When I was reading the first few chapters, all I could think of was basically "Hell yeah, this is the great dynamic between Silver and Kotone/Lyra that I've always loved so much" because you manage to write them so well!

I think now I gotta go and read the oneshots and probably read At the Start to remind myself of the events that happened in the latest chapter to prepare for whenever you update that :P But then again it's almost 1am.. Whoops. Anyway, again, thanks for filling up some of my time (and feels for this ship) by having these stories to read! I should probably sleep now...

Ummm... What's a lanyard?

Asa... PISSES ME THE HELL OFF.
That little shit.

I finally found this again! :D
The first time I read this was a while ago, when I was nine or so—I loved it, but at that point the story was only three chapters long, and I never found it afterward. I'm glad I finally managed to locate it again :)
Your writing is magnificent! I really loved Kotone and Silver's relationship and how it grew throughout the story, and seeing the reason for Asa being…well, a jerk, was really interesting. The ending, although not all butterflies and sunshine, was still happy.
Keep up the good work!
-A Drop of Raine

Well, I don't know if you were that mean... I've seen authors make me cry cause they killed off the main characters. Still, I really really love this story. I also like how you characterized the people and how you brought in Chouko at the end. :)

~Violet

I am just curious as to what she had. Other than that, I really like this story, a bit more than across the sun, mostly because it didn't feel as though... um, I don't know, rushed if that is the right way of saying this. Across the sun felt kind of like it was working against time, which it was for Steven, but like that this is more of going at your own pace style.

I almost felt like this should have been a dream for her and it was her mind trying to put all the pieces she had together before have them all.

It's so wonderful ;w;

OMG the feels ahhdk I was taken out of school for dizzyness and week spells so I totally relate to kotone love this story 101919920101/10 (y)

This is so sad and so nice and precious at the same time!
It felt like fireworks exploding on a starlit sky with lots of different colors! x)

I had fun reading this :))

I loved this! :D
I'm sad to see it end, but it was the best Silver x Lyra/Kotone I've read! Thank your for writing this! XD

Awesome story.

Wait ... Silver GAVE UP battling? Hibiki lost his spirit for battling? Are the only actual trainers Kotone and Asa?

And Silver is certainly fading into the background lately; all Kotone and Kotone and Asa and Asa, I guess. I'm only up to Chapter 10, so I might be proven wrong ... but Silver needs a bigger role than being Kotone's back-carrier! Doesn't she like him? Romance, arguments, something besides Kotone's quest against Asa?

'Cause we all know that once we get Fly in the games, that's all you do.

Nooooo... When I was in sixth grade, I had a friend that walked EVERYWHERE. Literally. She would, like, be in the middle of a route, and I would be waiting for her so we could do a link trade. She would have a flying Pokémon in her party, and I would be like, "Just use fly!"
And then she would say something about 'not hurting her Pokémon.' Yeesh.