Reviews for Lost
Guest chapter 20 . 3/31
This was really good thank you
Guest chapter 14 . 3/24
Hi
I like you story, it flows really well and it’s a wonderful read but you have made a few mistakes. I’m not sure if it’s intentional or a slip up. For example, you have Narcissa’s maiden name as Gruber. She is a black, Narcissa Black. Second, you changed the fact that Severus’ father was a muggle. It just ticks me off a little, unless it’s intentional in which case it’s cool.
Jonia chapter 20 . 9/29/2019
Love this story!
tsuki-shiroi chapter 19 . 8/24/2019
the chapter 19 is gone...is empty! please re update
kate1309 chapter 20 . 7/11/2019
Amazing story! I'm not sure if you're still writing, especially on here, but I hope you eventually add Chapter 19 if there was meant to be one. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this story. It was a really interesting take on the usual time turner story, it was different and because of that I really love it. Thank you for this story!
Chemistry123 chapter 4 . 5/28/2019
Wondering . .. does Hermione eventually get back to Ron and Harry and the present?
Stolenmoments93 chapter 20 . 5/1/2019
I think this story has so much potential! It’s very well thought out and I thought you did a good job of creating well rounded and believable characters. I think your dialogue needs a little work so that it’s more fluid and natural. I also thought the ending was a bit abrupt... I think if you had spaced it out into two chapters or spent less time focused on Severus’s initial reluctance it would flow a lot better! Overall good job!
Ladycane chapter 19 . 4/5/2019
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Ladycane chapter 18 . 4/5/2019
Lost lost chapter: .

Thank you author for this amazing story.
cdarby1 chapter 20 . 2/11/2019
Loved your story! So much detail! I love your version of a young Snape. And how they don't hate each other right off the bat. I would love to read more time travel fiction from you! Keep up the writing! I'll definitely be following you! Hermione/Snape and Hermione/Draco are my favorite pairings!
wolfiegirl83 chapter 20 . 11/29/2018
Great story!
Ella-Haven chapter 19 . 8/26/2018
Don’t mean to be rude, but was there supposed to be a chapter 19?
Lucyole chapter 20 . 6/5/2018
Very good Story full of love and drama and friendship too I enjoyed it very much.
violetkitty chapter 20 . 3/17/2018
Why. Is. There. A. CHAPTER. MISSING?!
pixelbun1 chapter 8 . 2/26/2018
now I remember why I stopped reading this half way. It's an ok enough story, but somehow the characters have turned into "Like omygawd" Valley girls.
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