Reviews for Lost |
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Guest chapter 20 . 3/31 This was really good thank you |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/24 Hi I like you story, it flows really well and it’s a wonderful read but you have made a few mistakes. I’m not sure if it’s intentional or a slip up. For example, you have Narcissa’s maiden name as Gruber. She is a black, Narcissa Black. Second, you changed the fact that Severus’ father was a muggle. It just ticks me off a little, unless it’s intentional in which case it’s cool. |
Jonia chapter 20 . 9/29/2019 Love this story! |
tsuki-shiroi chapter 19 . 8/24/2019 the chapter 19 is gone...is empty! please re update |
kate1309 chapter 20 . 7/11/2019 Amazing story! I'm not sure if you're still writing, especially on here, but I hope you eventually add Chapter 19 if there was meant to be one. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this story. It was a really interesting take on the usual time turner story, it was different and because of that I really love it. Thank you for this story! |
Chemistry123 chapter 4 . 5/28/2019 Wondering . .. does Hermione eventually get back to Ron and Harry and the present? |
Stolenmoments93 chapter 20 . 5/1/2019 I think this story has so much potential! It’s very well thought out and I thought you did a good job of creating well rounded and believable characters. I think your dialogue needs a little work so that it’s more fluid and natural. I also thought the ending was a bit abrupt... I think if you had spaced it out into two chapters or spent less time focused on Severus’s initial reluctance it would flow a lot better! Overall good job! |
Ladycane chapter 19 . 4/5/2019 . |
Ladycane chapter 18 . 4/5/2019 Lost lost chapter: . Thank you author for this amazing story. |
cdarby1 chapter 20 . 2/11/2019 Loved your story! So much detail! I love your version of a young Snape. And how they don't hate each other right off the bat. I would love to read more time travel fiction from you! Keep up the writing! I'll definitely be following you! Hermione/Snape and Hermione/Draco are my favorite pairings! |
wolfiegirl83 chapter 20 . 11/29/2018 Great story! |
Ella-Haven chapter 19 . 8/26/2018 Don’t mean to be rude, but was there supposed to be a chapter 19? |
Lucyole chapter 20 . 6/5/2018 Very good Story full of love and drama and friendship too I enjoyed it very much. |
violetkitty chapter 20 . 3/17/2018 Why. Is. There. A. CHAPTER. MISSING?! |
pixelbun1 chapter 8 . 2/26/2018 now I remember why I stopped reading this half way. It's an ok enough story, but somehow the characters have turned into "Like omygawd" Valley girls. |