Interesting

A quite good story .Even though it's not but acceptable .

I loved it

It's an awesome story,i can't stop reading it. Can't wait till you continue it. I hope you do, it too good to stop writing. :)

This chapter pissed me off so Bad! Which is a good thing lol if I did t like this story I wouldn't be mad but seriously what the fuck Naruto keeps hurting and terrorizing Sasuke and Sasuke just let's him? Bullshit straight up bull shit

HaHAhaHAhAHAhahAHAhAhahaHa wHAt nO It'S FIIiIinE I DidN't NEeD My hEArT AnyWAYs

Here *rips out bleeding heart and shoves it towards you* TakE iT

CHIKAO IS NOT ALLOWED TO BE DEAD NARUTO IS GOING TO SAVE BOTH OF THEM AND THEN HE AND SASUKE WILL LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER AND CHIKAO WILL BE THEIR BABY AND WILL NEVER STOP CALLING SASUKE 'SAUCEY' AND THEY'LL BE A FAMILY OKAY?

OKAY.

I like the story
its interesting.I hope you update soon
the only thing that bother me is itachi.I mean..sure he's the bad guy and all so he had to be this cruel and heartless and what I have a very hard time picturing this ..well I simply can't see him as itachi.
okey,he can go all evil and went on a killing spree (like in the manga,although we all already knew what really happen) ,but..I can't never see him really want to kill . one of itachi's personality trait is his love for his brother,its his biggest "element" actually. so when I read that he's going to actually kill/ intend to kill sasuke I was I like...no no..that's not itachi. sorry I can't help myself I mean,cmon..he massacred his whole clan because danzo blackmailing him with sasuke's life and he even ready to betray the same village he loved so much if they ever harm sasuke so its just strange to think that he want to kill his brother now because of ..what ,his best friend stole his crush and he went batshit insane?
he he sorry for the rant..but aside from that I really really enjoy your I would be thrilled if you would update.

please,,?

My irritation rises as I realize I've read this story from beginning to end at least 12 times. I can't help it, either I come across it while searching for other stores , or purposely look for it, in hopes that you'll come back and finish this.

It really kills me that it's unfinished just because this is honestly my favorite story. Matter of fact, you just happen to be my favorite author because I love all of your Naruto stories. This story has so much depth, and it just amazes me on how this story have less than 1k reviews. Hopefully you'll see this and consider continuing. I'm not above begging. I'll do it. Just for this story. I would rather not beg. It can get very ugly.

You're an awesome writer. The way you portray Naruto it gives me chills, I can't get enough of how troubled, and hurt he is. The way his mother can't show weakness. How Tenten was there and how you faked her death, it shocked me to figure out that she was truly alive. Gaara is my all time favorite just by the way he acts "You like to pass out, don't you? But if you do it again, I'll kill you." You don't understand how hard I laughed at that.

Don't get me started on the Uchiha family. The fact that for once Sasuke was viewed as the "loved child" just spun me out the way. In all honesty it made perfect sense, and it basically spiraled Itachi into insanity.

I've never cried over an OC character. Honestly, I barely like OC characters. But I tell you, actual tears fell down my face as I read Chikao's death and Naruto's mourning. It broke me a little on the inside. He'd finally gotten a full "family" with his "Mommy" Sasuke, and his Papa Naruto, only to be the one taken away this time.

You'll never know how much I love this story. You should believe me, cause I've never spent my time to write this long of a review. I hope you see this, since it's been well over a year of you updating. If you do, feel free to talk to me about this story. You inspire me so much to write, I swear.

Lexii (FMAOHSHCSC)

wow..this story is so interesting although the events is a bit harsh but i still like it..plz update soon!

Love it,awesome

I am not going to criticize your story after all you can write anything you want but can people forgive the one whose blame for their son's death ( I would have killed sasuke despite how much I like him or not )

after reading the first chapter, i realize i've read this story before.. but i'm so confused. the story's all jumbled up in my head and it gives me a headache... what was the plot again?

i wonder what the elders will do to sasuke when they see him i hope naruto will be there to protect him update soon

For the record, I cried when Chikao was killed. Man, now I realise why this is labelled as a tragedy...Mh, c'est la vie. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one! I'm hooked!

I TOTALLY KNEW HINATA WAS THE SPY! YES!YESYESYESYES!

And I ALSO totally knew that Chikao was going to be in the backseat! Plus, Chikao is one possessive little cock-block, mm? But he's cute, and he calls "Saucey" Mommy _

Great story! I've never read one like this; yes, I have read some Yakuza, but it was different, so.