This has to go on. Come on it's a beautiful story you've cooked up here it needs and end. You can't leave Naomi hanging on for so long.m! :)

Such a lovely story. Even better than the movie but I am biased there and purposely so. To me Naomi and Emily are like magnets, inseparable. wish Emily grew a pair and told her parents to shove their ignorance deep where theier indifference stick is at lol. Nice process by the way, I'd give it a spectacular if you write the rest in less than month... No? Ok had to try. :) it's spectacular and can't wait for the rest.

I just finished reading this story and i'm absolutely in love with this. Please, post more soon. I need to know what happens to the girls

hi. just read this. and WAAAA please continue i also need my closure :))

WHAT HAPPENED. my heart. gaaaa

ii literally love this story so much read through it without stopping and it just gave me so many emotions! i really reeeeeeally hope you wont leave leave this without another update for much longer!

Oh i remember this amazing story.
I have to tell you i was completely caught off guard with the way you took things. The way emily's parents took her away was cruel. I bet jenna deleted all the emails naomi sent
This is soooooo good!
Pms!

Please please please don't leave it a million years to update again! This story is just amazing :-)

Keep going... Keep going ...

Oh yes... Keep going

I just read this for the first time! Awesome.

i just read this all in one day and im in tears right now like ive also never really completely watched the notebook but if this is close then that movie would make me a huge sap but regardless im already a huge fan and id love to see what happens next and i mean i kind of remember what happens to the "emails" in the movie? but im not sure but i definitely like the notebook this way compared to movie definitely, update when you can i love it either way i promise you this stories like now officially imbedded into my heart, maybe ill actually watch the movie when its done. but no guarantees, but i can already see myself watching it and crying again but over the naomily version. xDD

If I'm being honest you're being a bit inconsistent in a very important area and that's kind of off putting and puts a damper on the story for me...Emily is gay and you yourself have said it in your story more the once, in the second chapter and the story with j.j about liking sex with girls and being in to tits and fanny's... In skins Emily was very emphatic about her sexually and it is part of who she is.. Sure this is fanfic but still I feel that you should say true to the character and I don't think you have. It's not really Emily to me anymore. Unless of course she fooling herself into thinking she is happy with him just because she very much seeks the approval of her parent and mother mainly , and since she is getting said approval she is convincing herself that this is what is best even though in her heart she knows this isn't true. I hope you express the fact because this really was one of my favorite fan fictions... I really hope you don't take offense to this, it's just this chapter really bother me and it didn't make sense based on your story I really think you are a very talented writer and have a great story telling ability, I can't want it for your next update... Thank you.. :)

I love this story!

If I'm being honest you're being a bit inconsistent in a very important area and that's kind of off putting and puts a damper on the story for me...Emily is gay and you yourself have said it in your story more the once, in the second chapter and the story with j.j about liking sex with girls and being in to tits and fanny's... In skins Emily was very emphatic about her sexually and it is part of who she is.. Sure this is fanfic but still I feel that you should say true to the character and I don't think you have. It's not really Emily to me anymore. Unless of course she fooling her self in to thinking she is happy with him just because she very much seeks the approval of her parent and mother mainly , and since she is getting said approval she is convincing herself that this is what is best even though in her heart she knows this isn't true. I hope you express the fact because this really was one of my favorite fan fictions... I really hope you don't take offense to this, it's just this chapter really bother me and it didn't make sense based on your story I really think you are a very talented writer and have a great story telling ability, I can't want it for your next update... Thank you.. :)

What happened to emily being in to " tits and fanny " as she stated in her speech to j.j and there were lots of mentions that she is indeed gay... It just doesn't make sense unless she is only with freddie because her family wants her to be... but glad to see you updated!