You got me addicted! I love how you snuck in the baby line when things were smooth! I'm playing an entire movie in my mind while I read this. Great job (:

Amazing storyline so far! Thank you for the chapters.

See, now THAT is a normal reaction to someone dropping an "im a werewolf and your my soulmate" infobomb.

Kim in so funny under the quiet you write get as when it's not her POV.

Thanks for these different POVs I enjoyed them

Wooo! I knew my girl Hannah wouldn't let me down. She is still a bit wary which I think can only be good. And interesting for the plot, ya?

That "our children" slipup IS pretty adorable though, as are the guys' reactions. How embarrassing and I can relate believe it or not. I have a lifetime condition of foot-in-mouth syndrome and it pops up at the most embarrassing times.

That has endeared this new and improved Paul to me a bit. And poor Brady.
I can relate to not only saying the wrong the but the absolute worst thing you can say

Hehe. I had a suspicion. Kinda snuck up on her. Feelings are sneaky that way. Sneaky little buggers. By the time you can ever identify and name them (love, hate, anger, sorrow, loneliness, etc) it's too late haha

Wow. That chapter was intense. I got some chills when reading the memory. Just cause...wow.
And funny. I love all those 'first phase' stories. Pixie stix! Ha!

First may I compliment you at how well you do with your dialogue to non dialogue. Lots people don't think this is a big thing by my mind starts to wander during a story if there is too little non dialogue or too little dialogue.

It a me thing, but it means I really appreciate when I find a writer who does the proportions in a way so it's easier for me to read.

And whhhyyyyy? Why did she just accept his friendship and is not suspicious? I mean, get for the plot to move along thier relationship had to progress and I really like that this isn't just another instalove story (amen hallelujah), but I wish she would have shown a little suspicion.

Maybe that's just me projecting my own paranoia haha

I don't even know what he did wrong but ya know what? After that awesome intro I dont really care. I'm ordering #TeamHannah t-shirts as I write this.

Sorry haha I had tons of sugar and it usually takes a lot more to get me hooked on a fic so congrats on that.

(this is for the previous ch)

Btw, this intro... AM I RIGHT?!

By the end of it in was jumping around my room cheering on rant on shouting

Rest of previous review:

"You show him ,girl!"

hahaha just in my head though

But I can't wait for the rest

high five

Ok so this is a bit awkward but what is Darkest Powers?

See, I don't really read books about werewolves on purpose. Not cause I dont like them or something or have something against the genre but it just turned out that the only books I ever read with them were books I chose because of something different that just happened to have werewolves in them.

I didn't even know that werewolves and shifters were different things until something about it was mentioned in a book and I asked someone and they nearly but my head off at my lack of knowledge (yikes, ya? No offense but some fans at touccchhhyyyy).

I mean so.e of the wolves do turn out to be my favorite characters. Seth, Remus Lupin, etc.

So... I agree Paul is so funny.

And is Darkest Powers a book? At first glance I had thought you meant darkest minds haha but there are no wolves in that so... right? *runs to check*

re-reading again ! love it

this is EVERYTHING!

loooove this x making me tear up at the realness of it

Love this book so far and I’m sure you know this and just felt like changing it but...his last name is Lahote. Every time I read “Paul Walker” it makes me think of the actor.