| Reviews for Captive |
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swagatamalfoy chapter 10 . 9/5 Oh nooo! This was sooo sad! But beautiful story! Loved it! |
sararosemason2008 chapter 4 . 8/15 I read another story about Stefan either NOT BEING ABLE TO EAT OR REFUSING TO EAT and they did the same thing with the feeding tube to him! I think if you look up the keywords DAMON FEEDS STEFAN you could find the story!She sounds almost catatonic when she's letting the Depression take her over!When you said straps are you meaning wide leather ones,that go across the bed and are buckled together like a belt,they used to use in hospitals,back before the 1980's,or cloth ones that are used now? I saw the previews for a movie,called Feed,about this girl whose twin brother was killed in a car accident,but she survived,and it triggered Anorexia for her to cope with the loss!The scene when she refused to drink the supplemental drink,for the 3rd time in a row,led the doctors to put a feeding tube in her,and it made my tummy hurt just thinking about it,OUCH!You did that part for Elena PERFECTLY,I thought!When I had our daughter in 2016(on my 29th birthday)on the 29th of October,the exact date the Stock Market crashed in 1929(if you know your History at all),and had complications afterwards to where they had to do surgery on me for female problems,they had to put a tube in my trachea to help me breathe while in surgery,and took it out after that in Recovery,taking it out HURT LIKE A BASTARD!My throat was sore and I couldn't get enough water to satisfy me(we have a well at home and it was a big city in TN,obviously with city water)with me being so thirsty from having it down my throat and then taken out!That's ironic to me because normally I don't drink too much water even at home,I suppose I can blame it on the hormones making me not be normally acting like myself,HaHa!What a hot prick for acting like that when she woke up in the morning!What a good chapter,though!Keep up the good writing! |
sararosemason2008 chapter 3 . 8/15 Being under house arrest must be bad enough for Elena,but being locked in and grounded to her room must be driving her bat crap crazy!At least she has the comfort of being able to write in her Diary and get her emotions out that way! I'm loving the story so far!Keep up the good writing! |
kimminnee chapter 10 . 10/8/2015 This was depressing. I thought you were building up to a great love story...but, instead I read a quickly changing, and even quicker odd timed and sad ending. |
kimminnee chapter 7 . 10/8/2015 Q: is this Stefan going to be like the Stefan on TVD?A righteous self loathing passavist like he is on TVD? Will you have the Stelana\Delana love triangle? I hope not. Stefan is not not a good match for Elana in a passionate wise. She is to much for him. And is Damon going to make Elena his mate instead of just one of his 3 humans? He better pick Elena! She cares for everyone , Katherine only cares for herself. |
kimminnee chapter 6 . 10/7/2015 Nice twist. |
kimminnee chapter 5 . 10/7/2015 Very nice . DEX! Finally! Thank you! |
kimminnee chapter 3 . 10/7/2015 Damon is already falling for Elena. He just doesn't want to admit it. And Elana is to. They are both fighting it for similar, but, different (at the same time) reasons. They are fighting it for the same reasons, difference in species. |
kimminnee chapter 1 . 10/6/2015 I'm not sure yet. I will decide next chapter if I like this fic. The setting is different than any other I have read so far. I'm new-ish to Fan Fiction. And I'm learning my way around. Sence TVD'S S6 ending, and Nina leaving the show, Delana only exists through writings of fans. And I'm not ready to do without my Delana yet. I'm on Twitter kimminneecricke and Tumblr as kimminnee |
naty chapter 2 . 4/10/2015 pov damon pleaseeeeee |
MisZ AnArchy chapter 10 . 2/8/2015 This was truly an amazing story! I loved it to bits. I just could not stop reading. I love your writing style as well. |
AlwaysElisabethian chapter 10 . 5/31/2014 Noooo! Simple rule for Delena fan fics, you CANNOT kill Damon. God, I am crying! I loved it, though. Beautifully written and stuff, but you just can't kill off Damon (something Julie Plec doesn't know yet...) |
AlwaysElisabethian chapter 9 . 5/31/2014 Didn't expect that. But I loved it |
AlwaysElisabethian chapter 8 . 5/31/2014 ... You evil author! Cliffhanger! Haha, I loved it. Love Damon confessing his feelings, her going to the back of her closet. Just loved it! |
AlwaysElisabethian chapter 7 . 5/31/2014 Ooooh... As I said in the last review, interesting. I really want to write a lot about how much I love this chapter, but I feel compelled (pun fully intended) to read on.! |