Oh, that was absolutely adorable! :) I so wish that there was a continuation!

aWWW love the au

THAT WAS SO SWEET

I LOVE IT

Nooooooooo moooooooore!

Ah, that's so lovely! I adore this story :) It was such a heart-warmer!

cute! XD plz, update soon

Rofl! This story freaking awesome!

CUTE! XD

oh please could you turn this into a chapter fic? it's so good! XD

ENDING? WHY ENDING?

I have to say, this was thoroughly enjoyable :D Wonderful!

omg i love this! how cute~

Aw... but.. but... I wanna know moreeeeeeeee!

Please continue this! This storyline has a lot of potential... it's so good!

Awww... Fai adores Kurogane, just like Kurogane adores Fai...

It's nice to see them both being so shy... it's adorable! Mang-Mang is awesome too xD

It was a great story, with lots of plot potential(Cough cough, nudge nudge, SEQUEL~!) and I can't remember seeing any grammatical or spelling errors, great Job on everything!

~A.k.u.r.a.

This was such an enjoyable story! I love how it was AU but none of the characters were OOC and you even inserted yourself into the whole thing seamlessly! Bravo!

I think it could've been longer, or maybe have a few chapters as a continuation. But that's just me. I don't want to pester you to continue it if it's already finished in your mind but I'm just sayin'! ;D

Much love,

Franny xoxox

you right, something bad always happen to Fai in your every story...it's a good one though

A very nice and cute story indeed, but have you posted this somewhere before? I've read it before... C:

-Kini