Well, he's bound to enjoy a free cigarette - a line that screams Izaya

Burn...Burn...Burn to the ground...

Burn...Burn...Burning flesh all around...

Cry...Cry...Crying away...

Fading...Fading...Fading...

It's sad...what some people say...

This is good really good , man that ending gave me the heebie jeebies! Damn that was soooo good! Awesome job!

Wow... just wow. Izaya is portrayed perfectly and the story itself leaves just enough for the imagination, which is ! Your a brilliant writer! Just wow.

Cool! I really like your style, though I'm not totally sure why. Its tone is sort of cute, and funny and terrible all at the same time. Really unique, keep it up!

Looking at things from Izaya's perspective was fascinating, especially at the end when the gap between Izaya and Akira's perspectives toward the same event at the same time became apparent. Izaya is so nonchalant about it while methodically disposing of His Arsonist. So possessive about it. I like that this fic started with the day starting and ended with sunset, neat and clean. And that last phrase, "his burns are healing"... so much love for it.

*shiver*

never - EVER - piss Izaya off.

Great story! You've gotten Izaya's personality down! :D

Wow. What can I say other than it's totally freakin awesome? Nothing except you've got him down to the T.

Amazingly, Izaya would do that...

I love how poetic this story is! Even without the awesome story line, it would be fun just reading the way you write

I loved this so much. )

I had no idea that you could combine horror and humor until I read this. And you did it well.

I thought not using any quotation marks would seem awkward, but it actually served to enhance the feel. I was very happy that Izaya was in character, by the way.

Very nicely writen :D sounds poetic

Ah, crazy!Izaya... my favorite. Awesome mix of humor and horror, and once again you nailed the characterization. Well done!

It seems I just can't get enough of Izaya, and your story offers such a wonderful lot of him and his lovely evilness. You manage to write the inner workings of Izaya's mind so very believable, all the gestures, his oh-so- friendly smiles or 'apologies', even the fact that he can be scared and wounded - it's all just /him/. How he thinks about Shinra, and of course Celty, is so adorable and funny. And his dealing with the arsonist, just perfect! Yep, he would definitely be most horrified to learn that he's fallen victim to a stupid, senseless accident, rather than some huge conspiracy... xD

Simply amazing, I really don't know what else to say.

really loved this story so much. )

it was a great point of view, and the situations were portrayed really well through izaya's mind.

oh dear, teaches them not to pick a fight with a psycho. xD

i love how crazy he is in this.