This was wonderful. I love the ending. This is a brilliant story. Cheers and ta!:)

Great story! I laughed so hard on the last three sentences! I have a brother and sometimes he gives me good advice, but his mouth works faster than his brain most of the time!

You are very talented! Keep on writing!

This has been my 4th time reading it! I love this story but I do wish there had been more to it. :o)

may i say, that was one of the best endings ever.

nice... i liked it...

ha ha that is so evan tripping and falling flat on his face :) loved the ending. everyone should always listen to evan!

really loved reading this story! since you haven't marked it complete, i hope that means you're planning to continue? at least an epilogue? pretty please?

Great story! I love Divia's last coment!

ha ha love it :) i can so see the last part actually happening on the show. cuz it probbaly did just with evan having to sit there and hank and dibya leaving him. great chapter. hope he dosent get like infected

oohhh come on finish the story

Oh, and I wouldn't mind if the chapters were a bit longer. I really wanna be into a story, and it not zoom by. But if your comfotable with short chapters, fine by me. Keep up the good work!

You r doing an awesome job with this story and don't let anyone tell u differently. I can't wait for the next chapters just thought I would let you know to keep up the good work

Oh, Please keep going! I thought you would never write again! You had me worried. I'm a little disappointed though, i thought there would be more angst for Hank than that, but I trust you. And you describing the rain, it made me shiver! Haha.

yay they are back! cant wait for more update soon :)

really liking this story - not enough like it here. please update soon!