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8579 chapter 1 . 5/29/2015 Oh wow! You did a great job! Thank you for posting this story! |
FrostyFeline chapter 1 . 7/10/2011 This is awesome! 'It flutters. And ninjas do not flutter. I'm sorry.' I pretty much gave up all hope of supressing my laughter there! It was just. Too. Funny. XD |
Nicky Eira chapter 1 . 1/23/2011 It's great to read an all-dialogue piece that's well written. Everything was captured in the dialogue, even Byakuya's facial expressions. And of course, the epic line- 'Ninjas do not flutter.' XD Hilarious. I don't see Byakuya in the Stealth force myself, he is kind of conspicuous P |
Nelarun chapter 1 . 1/21/2011 Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! hilarious! thank you for the much needed laugh. Nijas do not flutter... HILARIOUS! Nela |
Crazy4Gymnastics chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 Well I'm not sure if the end was supposed to be funny because like is he in the sixth squad now or l is yourichi saying he should join and then he does and becomes captain because if that's the case then it's funny great story though kind of random but great none the less |
AlleluiaElizabeth chapter 1 . 6/12/2010 lol "Ninjas do not flutter." XDDD |
OmniOminous chapter 1 . 5/31/2010 I like it, really funny. |