Reviews for Refusal
8579 chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
Oh wow!

You did a great job! Thank you for posting this story!
FrostyFeline chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This is awesome!

'It flutters. And ninjas do not flutter. I'm sorry.'

I pretty much gave up all hope of supressing my laughter there! It was just. Too. Funny. XD
Nicky Eira chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
It's great to read an all-dialogue piece that's well written. Everything was captured in the dialogue, even Byakuya's facial expressions. And of course, the epic line- 'Ninjas do not flutter.' XD Hilarious. I don't see Byakuya in the Stealth force myself, he is kind of conspicuous P
Nelarun chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! hilarious! thank you for the much needed laugh. Nijas do not flutter... HILARIOUS!

Nela
Crazy4Gymnastics chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Well I'm not sure if the end was supposed to be funny because like is he in the sixth squad now or l is yourichi saying he should join and then he does and becomes captain because if that's the case then it's funny great story though kind of random but great none the less
AlleluiaElizabeth chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
lol "Ninjas do not flutter." XDDD
OmniOminous chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I like it, really funny.