Awesome! Never seen this side of David! Cant wait for the sequel to "I Can't Love You" Wish there were more complete stories having Dwayne as the MAIN person.

YAY! Can you kill star now? or have Vanessa kill her? That works for me.

Ah loved it! And the tension. Oh, David. I love the way you write him, and I adore this story. Please update again soon!

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LOL can we please I'll feed her and make sure she plays nice with the mortals best line EVER! Really great chapter please tell me Star isn't around long?

UPDATE SOONIES ! CANT WAIT TO READ MOREEE ! :-D $$.xx

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! IT CAN'T END THERE! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON OR I'LL DIE AND IT'LL BE YOUR FAULT! jk but update soon please!

omg what happened and can star please get killed coz i hate her and yer but i like it but will love it more if star get killed

_ hey, super nice story. really well written. I love it. :)

...Oh god what's Star gonna do now! The girl freakin' irritates me like no other.

don't know what to say, the first 3 quarters of it were brilliant, I had my eyes pressed to the screen, then it seemed to hastily pick up speed at the end, and I feel slightly miffed, by her haste, I predicted a rejection leading to a pursuit. Though Istill likw the initial idea.

ah i loved it :)

i cant wait to read the sequels.

i wish i could write as well as you

YAY FOR A DWAYNE AND A DAVID SEQUEAL!

update soonies amazing ! .$$.xx

Great update. I love this chapter and I love your writing. I think you write David and a mortal so very well. Please update again soon :)

i love it please write more soon!