Please update soon I love this story!

Please update :'(

Please write more! You can't leave it like that !

Are you still updating the story?

I'm rereading this because I can. Also, because my own fanfiction inspiration has run out and I'm procrastinating, again. You'd have thought that this year would have taught me not to procrastinate. Nope.

I think this one is my favourite chapter. I love how you've characterised Alice in it. I think this is one of the chapters where we learn most of the key points of her character. It's nice. I know that my main writing problems come from pacing, so I like how you've dragged out the chapter (so to speak).

Angela is actually one of the few characters that I can tolerate. She's usually poorly-written in the other Twilight fics that I've read, but this is one of the rare stories that I like her characterisation and can read it without cringing.

Eh, my feelings on Twilight are now very similar to yours. Partly because most of Tumblr seems to despise it and it's kind of hard to feel positively about a book series that I've been disturbed by from the moment I got halfway through the first book, especially when most of the people I follow on Tumblr seem to spend a lot of time mocking it.

Anyway, happy writing.

please update? its really good

When are you going to update?

Keep writing it is a wonderful story!

Are you still writing this story, it is quite good?

Ok. This is by far the best alive and jasper story out there. Please continue to write as I stayed up until two in the morning to read this amazing story.

Thanks!

I really like your story and can't wait for the next chapter. update soon please!

so far ... THIS STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME!
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!
KEEP ON WRITING!

I like it! Quit bad-mouthing and update! And I hope that James isn't going to let his singer go so easily.

HEY I JUST REALIZED I HADN'T REVIEWED THIS CHAPTER YET KEEP UP THE BUTT WORK BUTTFACE :D

Well, Alice is a lot less self-pitying than Bella was in New Moon, thank God. I might have died if she was. Poor her and Jasper, though. I like how you put this whole thing, using essential points from New Moon and editing them to make it your own. But dear lord, don't make Alice jump off a cliff and go through the whole Volterra hassle. Please. As a reader, I am begging you.

Alice is too not-like Bella to do that. Please.