Crocodile tears haha

Pretty good ending, you handled it well.

How come every time i read a FF about mercer his fellings arent that of a killer but more like an overly sentimental person i mean really its getting old;-)

Beautifully written. I loved the ending.

Fu**ing bad ending. You do a family/hurt/comfort story, rate it T and then give it a fu**ing bad ending without even a fu**ing disclaimer about character death. I hate you and I wish you all the worst for making me waste my time reading this, you as*hole.

Interesting story but sad!

Man... Second time I've read this and I've bawled everytime. This is so good, I think you've made me love Alex all the more, even Greene, and Lionel of course! I really do enjoy this fic, very very good, friend.

Aw, such a happy twist at the end. But...so what was this "until dawn" thing? 'Cause Alex and Greene were on about that and then suddenly it was a week later?

Wow. This was amazing. Sad, but amazing. It's awesome how you actually put in what Alex was actually feeling... It's just how I imagined he would feel in the game. Excellant work! :)

It's never fun sharing your brain with someone else, especially two someone elses. I know from experience.

Very noce story indeed. I love all the raw emotion. Just one thing though, I don't think Alex can actually cut himself, because it would just heal over right away.

Lolz, he survives a nuke without a scratch, but punches a mirror and gets a cut. :D

You know I have to admit, I read the description of this story and thinking that it didn't sound too interesting I put off reading it but then going back and actually reading it I found that I had thought wrong...very wrong at that. This story was VERY good, filled with raw emotion and made me feel what Alex was feeling. You can always tell if a story is good if it makes you feel something. Chapter 9 actually made me shed a few tears. I know I might seam like I'm exaggerating on how good this was but being an empath I look to read storys filled with raw emotion, idk why it's almost like a guilty pleasure; being able to feel the anger and rage or sadness and even happiness through the characters. This story gave me exactly what I was looking for. Great job and keep it up! I will def. have to take a look at your other work.:)

ps. I didn't mean to sound all weird by the empath thing lol :P

wow this is incredibly deep and very well written...I like being able to see Alex beginning to understand human feelings. The description is very detailed and I really get a feel of what's going on. So far I absolutely love the story. :)

i liked it. good job.

*Sob*

Poor Alex, he had to kill Lionel...

I feel so sorry for him.

Nice story by the way!