Snape is such an arse I don’t want to read any further. Why the hell would Harry have to apologize? Snape mind-raped him throughout his occlumency lessons. Harry only peeked into his pensieve once. If he had taught Harry occlumency properly, Siri would still have been alive. Not to mention the 5 years worth of humiliation and ridicule the bastard put Harry through. I can’t believe I wasted my time reading so far.

Ich liebe diese Geschichte. Schade das du sie aufgegeben hast.

I started reading this knowing that it was discontinued. I thought it would be worthwhile because I was enjoying your current writing.
I was right

You are creative, thoughtful and a good storyteller

Such a clever mind

Thank you for sharing all of your talents with us

Very interesting. Please continue. I love the description of how Harry used emotions as shields. It's unfortunate that doing so opens him up empathically causing him to feel not just the victims in the dreams but it seems every around him as well.
There are some word subsitution errors.
I think you mean Prefect and Captain "badges" rather than "batches"
And twice you wrote "beacon" instead of bacon.
And is inexistent a word? Apparently so but pretty archaic. It just doesn't flow well.
" It was true, just like he had feared; his abilities to perform nonverbal spells seemed inexistent." The more common word choice is "nonexistent"

Nevertheless, thank you for writing.

I know this is abandoned but I read it anyway because I love your Harry Potter fanfictions! This was a great story :) thank you for writing even part of it

I absolutely love your storyline and characters! I found this story less than a day ago, and couldn't stop reading! As Ive now reached this last chapter, I really hope, you'll complete this story sometime in the future (even if its discontinued at the moment!).

Thanks for most of a fic. Well written :)

This is an exceptional chapter. I love the way Harry handled the class and that McGonagal was shocked at his lessons. She actually learned something herself about teaching. I look forward to more of this story. pms

Wow! This is really different. Very well done. thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms

I started this story knowing it was not complete because I enjoyed your Bridges story so much.

I did want to point out the following sentence because it made me giggle. You can be "one of few" or "only" but "one of only" doesn't work.

"He was one of the only people in England capable of brewing it," (Wolfsbane)

I know you said this has been abandoned and I knew it when I started reading it, but D*MN, you were on such a roll. Thanks for what you did write! (and it's spelled "sheer" not "shier" as in sheer terror)

Do you have migraines? The reason I ask is that ergotamine is one of the classic treatments for migraines in different forms.

Huh... since bits of this seem to carry over to Building Bridges and vice versa, are we gonna find out more about the Indicendi in there? Or the Empath stuff (even if it's not necessarily Harry, though I have the inkling he might be one in there, too)? Or more about Aiko-sensei and the Pretty people? Gotta admit, I'm super curious now.

Shiva the Destroyer, huh. I am seriously enjoying the irony you present, it's great lmao

Alright i take it i was thinking of the wrong kirei then