Um here’s a theory that I kind of want to die because I thought of it. What if the twins aren’t twins are are really husband and wife that everyone thought were actually related. I mean ruffnut doesn’t wear a kransen and they both have the last name thorston. So... yeh think that through.

My only regret is that it ended so soon.

Hahahaha that ending was gold

lol this is the only one ive ever seen the characters portrayed right( to the tiniest thing they are exactly like they are in canon).

I can't stop laughing at how Astrid literally pinned Hiccup down HAHAH BC I CAN TOTALLY IMAGINE THAG HAPPENING OMFG

I really enjoyed this, the footnotes at the end of each chapter were especially helpful!

Love your story. It has so much details about Viking culture. I'm impressed and thankful for the additional knowledge from your story. And you ship Hiccup with Astrid, along with the smut scene which is a plus plus XD

Really great job with this. (:

I love Stoick's little stare after he says "talking..." all he has to do is stare, that cracked me up. I have loved every minute of this story and much it made me laugh, combined with the sheer amount of accurate information.

And the dragon says, "FINALLY! You humans complicate EVERYTHING!"

Yeah, Hiccup isn't going anywhere. Astrid won't let him.

Well then, if that isn't one of the biggest efforts to apologize that I have ever seen, I don't know what is.

Ya know, for a guy with only one foot, he keeps putting it in his mouth on a disturbingly regular basis. Lucky for him Astrid loves him so much and that he has a clever tongue...and fingers.

Point 22 was hilarious at least the aside was. "riding them like a race horse..." *snigger*

Hiccup is starting to get a clue that she isn't going anywhere. Finally

I love how Astrid keeps trying to take firm control and she does...just in new and interesting ways.