Reviews for Betrothed
LordWoodrow chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
I love your stories.
littlemissstarkid chapter 7 . 5/19/2012
It's hormaNAL, not hormoNIC. Just saying.
dadby chapter 7 . 5/8/2012
I LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY! SO AWESOME AND CUTE WITH HARMONY! H/HR FOREVER!
Lielac chapter 4 . 3/20/2009
*snicker* Cassandra is such a reversal of a Mary Sue...

Seriously, she is. Tries to woo Harry (and in the 'regular' Suefics, succeeds), and takes out the 'bad guys'.

... Except for two things. A, she's an evil BITCH who's taking out the competition for taking over the world, and b, Harry's like 'eugh get away'.

... Oh, and she's a carbon succubus. DUH.
artdiva89 chapter 7 . 8/5/2008
i loved the ending! it was so sweet

~animeluvr89
artdiva89 chapter 6 . 8/5/2008
how could cassandra get into the chamber of secrets? does she know parseltongue too?

~animeluvr89
artdiva89 chapter 5 . 8/5/2008
Harry contacting Voldemort? No way would that happen in the books!

~animeluvr89
artdiva89 chapter 4 . 8/5/2008
kissing cho? that's a little weird...

is she pretty much going to go after EVERYONE that has hurt harry?

~animeluvr89
artdiva89 chapter 2 . 8/5/2008
okay, i'm all for malfoy being out of the picture and everything but... WHAT THE HELL DID SHE DO TO HIM?

~animeluvr89
artdiva89 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
not bad.. but it seemed like you were trying to rush this chapter a little bit. Overall I liked it, especially the kissing scene and harry being shocked.. "

~animeluvr89
Midnight Callwel chapter 7 . 2/10/2008
Hi.I love your the Mage Knigths trilogy and Bethroted.I keep reading them over and you could create diffrent characters for the Mage Knigths series and have it published.
CrimsonAngel1992 chapter 7 . 3/11/2006
i love it
mcabello chapter 7 . 11/27/2005
Good fic. Write more soon
DarkMoon1301 chapter 7 . 11/15/2005
i really liked it. wait... thats wrong... i didnt like it at all. i luved it!
Sirithtalwen chapter 7 . 8/15/2004
mer! i loved it! so sweet and yet so interesting with Cass... i wish she didnt die and like the mum did the contract thingy and a sequel when i guess Cass would have gotten out of Azkaban... but i loved it!
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