Awesome! *_*

this is so good this can not be your first story this has a great plot and great grammar and flow to it keep up the amazing work this is a unique story be proud of it and keep up the fantastic work

so sad but awsome

I love it! Add more! Please!

this story is so great. . I really love the story. . . would there be a sequel?

At first, I'm sorry for my (bad) English. :'D

But what I really want to tell you is: What an amazing story! *_*

I like your spelling style so much and this idea is simply great.

Do you plan any sequel? I hope so, 'cause I'm pretty nosey.

I want to know, how Sakuras Mom react or if there any love between Sasuke & Sakura.

And last but not least about that 'Unknown Kingdom'.

Regards,

Princess-Kagami 3

Even though your story is short and I want to have a sequel, this is still beautiful!

I really love it

so did she die to be with him? or is she just dead?

love the story. did sakura die or is she with sasuke

Interesting, different idea to a story.

But I have a few things I'm not clear on, how did Sasuke know about Sakura's feelings for Sasori? Unless he was somehow able to keep an eye open and see what she was doing without her knowing.

And why Sasuke chose her of all the other descendants her grandmother had, unless he could see she was lonely.

That's all that I was really curious about, anyway, hoping to see the sequel.

I feel you did a great job, one or two typo's, you have excellent grammar.

whoa! the ending was quite abrupt. i don't get it honestly. i think either she left her body to be with sasuke or she committed suicide after watching Sasori and Ino together? Which one is it?

omg i loved it !

it was creepily romantic in a good way .

yea this story is kinda sad but i like it!

by the way to become an unknown's bride you yourself become one? do you have to die or something?

wow this is so good i cant wait for the sequel

this was ok... but i wish you would have been more specific about how Sakura died...

but it was a good short story... you should do a prequl to how Sasuke wanted Sakura's grandmother.. or a sequal to what their love can be.

good luck