Wow im just imagining Lance rapping the rap i wrote about him a while ago lol

IM CRYINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THIS IS TOO BEAUTIFULLLL

i didnt think that was an authors note, i thought it was blues P.O.V for some reason

This was awesome :) I just have to say that I was hysterical when you mentioned Monty Python and the Holy Grail since that's my favorite movie EVER :D

Ignore my past review of this story. I grew to like the new Giovanni and with my mind still caught up on other stories I didn't notice what good plot and character development there was. Great story and I would definitely recommend to a friend if I had any.
10/10

Great story so far and its only getting better the only weird part is Giovanni. But I think that is from reading clockwork where he was an egotistical twat.

Why did you kill Giovanni? :( I was liking this fatherly Giovanni. I don't doubt that Gold could be quite affectionate so I think he's not too ooc. :) And Silver got to ride on both Entei and Ho-oh? WOW. Lucky guy. lol

Omgomgomgomgomgomg

Yay no more poor Gold :D

Poor Gold :,

I think I just had a heart attack. Are you trying to kill me?! :P

Awww! I love Sneasel!

Amazing story! I just read it from beginning to end, and it was ever so sweet, exciting, and romantic throughout. It was really interesting to see everyone's character development, and their parents and friends along the way, and this is the first PMS fic I've read with Giovanni in a positive light(which I thought was awesome). Overall, fantastic story, and I hope the sequel is just as good.

Sup! I really like this story. Like a LOT. It focuses on more on their positive relationship than just the two of them getting together. And Giovanni LOVES his son in one of these stories for once. He doesn't abuse him or anything like that. I like that shiz. .

Lance is EVIL! And what is with Gold not liking heat?