Keep it coming plz it is good

Good story overall if a little emo on occasion, but then again nobody ever said writing was easy I guess! Anyways was hoping the sequel would be out after 7 years :(

It’s sad you killed jenny :(

It feels like you just turned Xander into an emo angsts tick turd at the end. I will do this alone because I have to! It is my destiny! Or something?

interesting story, looking forward to a possible sequel :)

very good

Great job on this amazing story!

thanks good story please keep me updated with you

MORE PLEASE

NICE JOB ON TARA

nice job so for in handling Alex pain on Jenny. I still like to have her back or get back to him they did that in Highlander 2 the movie but it is your story and it is still a good one that I look forward to reading and enjoy thanks

Great chapter, even if the flashback was annoyingly long. Hope you focus more on the 'present' than flashbacks now that we know how that crisis was handled.

WTF! WHY DID YOU KILL OFF JENNY? i THOUGHT I WAS SUPPOSE TO BE ALL FOUR

bo bo why kill Jenny off and you are making it in possible for any one to live or win their freedome. I agree that in this story Buffy is that stuid to just run off and attact, but she is supernature where the monesters or man made. nature would win over man or in the movie the woman was infreicded but the infreicd man turn monster. the woman would be more like a slayer

WTF? i thought your pairing is jenny/jill/rebecca or are you going to revive her later on?