You can damn right he'll be looking forward to Christmas i would too* evil smile* loved it and I understand the inspiration thing I once went from the first fanfic in my series to my seventh cause I got inspiration keep up the good work

Good job :3

*nosebleed river* fangirl hormones are very pleased. XD

Good job w

Please work on your grammar, it almost ruined the yaoi...

eeeeekkkkkk...could u make more of Sebastian x Ciel Plzzzzzz

I think it was good for your first time... ciel's too

It's good for a first lemon, my only comment is that Sebastian wouldn't purposely hurt Ciel; he'd try to make it as comfortable as possible. At least, that's the way I see it XP Feel free to disregard this. :)

I love it! The idea is pretty original, and I adore that lovely collar that Sebastian puts on Ciel. X3

I know it might be quite... late review, but I really liked it. :)

Although I noticed that you sometimes change the times in the story, sometimes past, sometimes present. It's a little irritating. From my own experiences I know that it's easiest to write everything in the past time, but even if you change present, please stuck with it.

*nosebleed* so... Hot...

That was really durty but really well written yaoi. Kudos to you :)

MMM... DON'T HAVE MUCH TO SAY...

IN GENERAL I LIKE YOUR WRITING STYLE (I'VE READ SOME OF YOUR STORIES)AND IT'S A JOY TO READ SOMETHING THAT HAS GOOD FLOW AND IT'S NOT TOO RUSHED OR ETERNALLY STRETCHED SPECKLED WITH GRAMMAR AND SPELLING HORRORS.

NOW TO THE REASON OF THE REVIEW (I DON'T USUALLY REVIEW IF I HAVE NOTHING SPECIAL TO SAY)... THE LEMON IS A TINY BIT CLICHÉ AND CLASHES WITH THE REST OF THE STORY, WHICH I LIKE AND FIND QUITE CUTE, SO AS A "EXPERIENCED" READER (LIKE 7 YEARS) ADVICE I SUGGEST YOU READ LOAAAAAAAAADS OF LEMONS OF DIFFERENT AUTHORS SO YOU CAN HAVE A WIDER POOL OF IDEAS/INSPIRATION/SUGGESTION/WHATEVER-YOU-WANT-TO-CALL-IT TO PULL FROM...

OR GO OUT THERE AND HAVE FUN (EXPERIMENT) XD

ALL IN ALL... THANKS FOR SHARING WITH US ALL, AS I SAID: A JOY TO READ.

I cant belive this was your first time writing an m one! It was amasing!