Love it!

Me encanto mucho la manera en que describirse las sensaciones y sentimientos de Dastan, el Dastan que describirse no sale para nada del personaje que represento en la película y aunque no hable ingles me dedique a intentar leerlo, esta hermoso, gracias por compartir un pedazo de cielo en . XD

good job

i think that this is very well written!

Some minor factual errors, like Dastan wouldn't have "not been born" if the uncle's actions went through, he would just remain an orphan boy.

BUT, it is still a wonderful fic anyway and I enjoyed reading it :)

Very well written. It was good to read Dastan's POV on Tamina's death for a change.

I loved it.

Loved the brillant storytelling you did

God bless you too and keep writing

great fic I thought it was best to read with you came for me by harald kloser

I was so happy when I found this story. It was one of if not the first dastan/tamina fic posted and I loved it! After seeing the movie I was mabey, possibly, slightly, completely obsessed with dis couple. So I read this when it was still in the games catagory. Haha good times :)

n e wayz, I thought I'd drop by to leave a coment.

-Megan-

Awesome. This was extremely good!

It's brilliant I love it!

Oh I love it! :) Nice work.

Loved reading about Dastan's thoughts during that whole scene with the hourglass. Aww I nearly cried when Tamina let go and Dastan ended up yelling at himself. Well overall, I thought this was an enjoyable piece to read.

OMG I LOVE THIS! Write more Dastan/Tamina please? :)