Great story, so far. I am sorry you seem to not finish your stories, as you have a wonderful imagination and a talent for bringing your characterizations to life. Your grammar, particularly apostrophes, commas and homonyms needs some work. Also, you disrespect the original author of Harry Potter and her whole body of work by misspelling her name, in every chapter’s disclaimer.

Keep writing! You can greatly improve your readability by paying more attention to every word you type.

Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.

I wonder two things, maybe more, I'm not sure. Was James Potter just a spoiled rich kid or had Dumblebutt put a compulsion charm on him and Lily. Sounds to me like Charlus Potter was aware of Dumblebutt's manipulations of his immature son. Lily was supposed to be smart. I would think that she, if she was smart would have seen through Dumblebutt's half truths and manipulations. Potions could affect judgement as could loyalty and compulsion charms. Also, the mention of payments allocated for Harrys care were being issued by Dumblebutt, then he is guilty of fraud. I can't wait to find out what the solicitors find.
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

I like this Harry, I like this story, I like your story telling talent. I can't think of a better way to have so much fun.
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

I noticed That you have accredited your daughter for at least two of your stories. Is she like a co-writer or just an idea person. what ever she is she is great with ideas and if she helps you write the stories, I like her suggestions. I wish I had talent like you two but, sadly I have none. Getten old ain't no fun, I now have a new appreciation, for the phrase " I've fallen and can't get up. But I digress, I'm on the fourth of your thirteen stories and so far have liked them all including this one. Thanks for bringing a little fun into my life.
Ron Pate
Traveler301

Please, please, please what happens next? I am booked in your work and cannot believe that you can write 2 or 3 stories at the same time and not get muddled up. GENIUS ! But why do you sometimes not finish a story? I know this was written ten years ago but it has me booked now and I want to know how it ends. P!ease out an old lady out of her misery and finish your stories, especially Trust is a relative thing.

A really interesting take on Rebellious Harry. I like him, and the initiatives to create inter House unity and cooperation - the gym, the common room, the newspaper - all stem from him.

I gather that Binns is the culprit destroying Harry's possessions and Ketteridge's books.

Why do I see Harry and Percy suspiciously getting along in the near future?

Very enjoyable story. I'm sorry you weren't inspired to finish it, but very glad you've left this much for your readers to enjoy. Thank you!

i really like this. are there more chapters?

this is so wonderfully satisfying! I adore it, I was downrght giddy reading it:) anything that twists Dumbledore's nose and sets stones in his path xD

Absolutely Brilliant... you are an amazing writer and I throughly enjoyed this story and am sad to see it incomplete. I hope someday you find this story again as it will be a knockout to HP fan-fiction. You have a talent... use it wisely.

This is a brilliant story. Well written with an intriguing plot line. The characterizations have enough variations from canon to be interesting. Harry catching Hermione immediately after Ron makes an ass of himself makes the tale far more interesting than chasing her down in the girls' lav. Dumbledore remains manipulative and scheming while be completely unaware of how control slipped away from him. As for Harry, it makes one wonder what he would have been like had his bio parents been able to raise him. Would love to see you return and update. Thanks

This is a great story. I loved it. I know it's been awhile but... If you wrote a new chapter I'd read it.

So Flitwick is incapable of doing an investigation, cannot ask the other members of the class what happened, cannot at least on the face of it censure Snape for refusing to call Mr Tatum, Mr Tatum. He doesn't have to take Harry's word, there's an entire classroom of people he has yet to ask a single question of. So whilst he has his agent in the class, Harry has to put up with another however many classes of abuse? If I were his councillors I'd have pulled him out after the second potions class. Any teacher who does that shouldn't last beyond a single day of term. Not to mention if the Gryffindors also report what he's likely doing to Neville...

Really really enjoyed this and I am saddened that there has no updates in a long time. I hope that you haven't stopped writing and that there will future postings