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Sorry it took me so long to catch up. Will see you in the next one!

When I went to check my email and saw an alert of this fic being updated, I got so happy! I really like where this story is going. I wanna read what it will be like when Sunako and Kyouhei meet. I'm also worried about Auntie ): but she's a fierce woman so I'm sure she's all right.

Looking forward to future chapters! This is going great, good job!
Have a good day :D

Good two chapters

I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Genial que bueno que actualizaste!

I'm looking forward for the next chapter ! :) I like it so pay a little attention to the tense you use. It's better if it was in the past tense. I felt like you rushed the last part of this chapter .the pace seemed a little faster
Besides that I'm really intrigued by the whole pirate thing. And which one of them is Scar and why ?!

I honestly believe that this could become one of my favorite stories of all time. Please update soon!

I'm so happy to see new activity around here :'D I was actually looking forward for this update heheh I just got caught up in a really long story before being able to check the first page again.

This looks so interesting! I'd really like to know what comes next. These guys are a legend as pirates, I love that xD
Thanks for sharing your work!

I actually remember this story from when I started reading fanfiction. I believe I read it all the way to the end, but I cannot remember much, so I'm glad to see that it's back. Good luck with the rewrite!

Hello! I'm very excited to see new activity around this fandom (': To say the truth, I didn't get to read this story before, but I'm eager to read it once it's updated! Hope you have an awesone week!

T-T me encanto estuvo muy buena la historia espero que hagas muchas historia de sunako y kyohei juntos me gustaría que hagas un lemmon de esta pareja y de karin y toshiro de bleach

Awww...:-D

The plot is good but there are many spelling and grammar errors.
Plus, Sunako is a bit out of character.

I really like the concept of this story, and the plot is very good but there are so many spelling/grammatical errors and typos that it is extremely hard to read and comprehend. There are very little descriptions throughout the story which lessens the affect. I think you should make a line or something when you switch from one place to another in the story because that confused me often. Please work on this story and/or have someone read and edit it, that would make the story so much better. -Serenity Ma Sogni