Could you at least tell me how you planned to end this.

How does this end?

I hope all has gone well for you since you declared this fic dead. I hope you've managed to get some original work out there. While this fic had been a massive departure from Code Geass, it was an enjoyable read. It's simply been a treat to read through the world you've painstakingly changed/adjusted, and experience the twists and turns you made. I doubt this comment will be read by you, but if it is, I do hope things are going well for you, and especially hope you've got an original work I can search out and read

I freaking hate that you paired cc with freaking Mao. Cc cared for him but never 'romantically loved' him! Agh I hate this fix for this very reason! And YES I AM OBSESSED WITH CC X LELOUCH

True about the ends but if that were the case the same can be said for suzaku his change it from within is utterly stupid when corruption runs so deep and knows lelouchs experience with the emperor his goal was fruitless from the start and in the dramas suzaku admits deep down a part of him always knew that but his traumas and deontoligical ideals out weighed that part of him that and the euphinator part if suzaku knew lelouch so well he would know that he never meant for that to happen not when she had a personality so much like nunally's but i digress theres a lot of errors in cg like the black knights betrayal anyway i know i am late to this story and only on ch 6 now i love it

One of the more enjoyable CG fics I've had the pleasure of reading. Unlike most fics of this nature, it actually made significant plot deviations right off the bat rather than just reading from the Code Geass script and paying lip service to the butterfly effect. While there were areas that I had some issues with, such as Gaspar's angrier personality (it just did not seem like a trait that Lelouch would find favorable), you were able to nonetheless write a good enough story and keep my interest.

Such a shame that the story has died. Granted, I went into it knowing that the story was dead, but it's always an unpleasant shock when instead of the next chapter, an Important Announcement loads.

At the very least, I would have liked a short synopsis of how the story would have went after the cutoff point, but from what I've seen of this story it does not seem like such a synopsis would have been accurate. Things that sound awesome pop up, and you add them in. As a writer I can say that I've done the same and, for the most part, it has turned out for the best. Still, some closure would have been appreciated.

That aside, thanks for writing this, even if it had to end halfway through.

Yea I'm gonna stop reading now. Even though you apparently watched the series this is getting too weird. The premise doesn't match up with the events. You misspell or misquote stuff like names and titles for no reason and you've got a load if other weird stuff going on like Zero's new costume. As such, nah. Have fun

S.S. Is Sayoko Shinozaki, might have the last name wrong, but I'm calling it now

Best story ever!

Way to end a series dude x.x at some point you should have realized for us fans of code geass that we were not here for fighter jets, economics or the real world because it sucks with all its crap, no we enjoyed how crazy and unreal it was and as much as it pains me ..this story was one of the few I enjoyed a lot (like Dauntless, rise of the black prince etc..etc) but you spoiled it...any writer worth their salt (besides the dude who is writing Meggido again, he didn't give up and actaully re-wrote it) but besides him most writers worth their salt have a half a brain to realize you do not 're-write' anything this long EVER, and no one continued this story because this is the only lelouch only fic 200k words plus with these twists, its sorta anti-climatic to realize the reason it ended so bad was because of a fighter jet :/

Great work although I'm upset that you had to stop posting it left me as much a mystery as the anime, good luck in your future endeavours.

I have a sneaking suspicion this is going to end with Zero helping Brittania liberate Britain.

several things about this story annoy the hell out of me. the Karen thing is EXACTLY like the Zolo thing from one piece, plus other things that I've already forgotten.
anyways, I like the premise, but meh.

OK, the Karen thing is kind of pissing me off.
it's spelt Kallen, and unless you have a legitimate reason for her name being spelt and pronounced like that then fix it already!

Ehem, sorry, she's my second favorite character of the show. Blasphemy must be punished :P

why is kallen called Karan? Is that supposed to be a Japanese accent?
I suppose you have to find some justification of how he didn't figure it out sooner if she seemed familiar.