Intersting

I really have enjoyed reading the story and I can't wait to see where it's going

I really enjoyed how you made Zuko go through a time of morning to help him get to a healthy point

The first chapter was really interesting I am curious to see what you're going to do with the air nomads

as long as you continue it, I don't care if you restart! bye!

I really hope you will put up the new version. I like this one very much.

Awww, this story is pretty epic from what I've read so far...

But I guess if I wish to read more, than a rewrite is necessary so your muse can return.

Best of luck and I cannot wait for version 2!

I like this oc, I've never seen one that would be a child of the general who was the one that Zuko stood up to. Usually I'm a bit skeptical when it comes to oc's but this makes sense and is interesting!

I hope you update soon! This is getting good~ And, I do love how you write Zuko's banishment days, since we didn't see any of it in the show, so keep it up~! .

Yay! An update.

Sorry, I'm just really glad there's another chapter because this story interests me a lot...There's so much mystery and possibilty, that it's hard to tell where it's going exactly, but I think that's kind of your point.

Looking forward to the next chapter and whatever it may hold.

Very nice chapter. Please update soon.

Well done with this story.

0oh wow, an update! :) Great chapter!

I started reading this and got really interested in your ideas...However, I was a little upset when I saw you hadn't updated for a while...So please please please update soon! I would really like to see more of your Oc and Zuko's change in personality.

I love this story. Really hope that you will update soon