Reviews for Delayed Player
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 15 . 5/29/2017
*hovers over Yosuke's body*

*whispers*
yeeeeess, Yosuke. Adachi IS creepy... You did good noticing thaaaaat, Yosukeeeeeee. Now doooon't forgeeeeet!

lol don't mind me. just being stupid.
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 14 . 5/28/2017
It is legit killing me inside.

Like, remember how Naoto started insinuating Adachi was evil? Why did she listen to her friends when they told her to drop it? Like, Is she scared of being shunned for trying to follow a lead? Is she scared she'll take the case more seriously than her friend's wellbeing like with Nanako?

And all this time i'm just sitting here yelling at the laptop screen going "YO. ADACHI IS EVIL." sigh.

ANYTHIGN FOR A GOOD STORY lol
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 13 . 5/28/2017
I hope Adachi eats a ghost pepper. It's apparently canon that he can't take anything spicier than wasabi, so ghost peppers should really show him up. mwahahaha
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 12 . 5/27/2017
sometimes I get confused by who's talking due to small sentence structures that werent there, but I use common sense to figure it out coz this is a smart-person story, and I like to think im smart (lol)
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 11 . 5/27/2017
WOW WHAT A TEASE

Like, yosuke could move the chair. he could put it up over his head. Like, the instructions to solve the puzzles aren't even clear. It's like my Friday accounting classes all over again. This is so rigged. *rages*

*calms down*

In all honesty, though, you've really played child!souji into quite the little terror. Like, DAYMN-SON that shit is wacked out. oh man that is both amazing and terrifying and SOUJI HAS ISSUES

im trying to process all this lol
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 10 . 5/27/2017
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No lie. Souji went from 'scared little marshmallow' to 'demon of vengence' real quick... p-p

remind me not to make him mad lol
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 9 . 5/27/2017
You kknow, there's actually a P5 fic where the MC's friends all enter the MC's mind to save him from himself and they go through a whole bunch of traumatic rooms. It's called "Behind the mask" and it's a one-shot sort of fic but its a monstrosity of a one-shot.

If anything, this really does remind me of that fic, because to the audio and visual that's shown in the rooms (that and how the parents are kinda dicks, and how the MC believes they're bad luck)

Still gonna read this fic tho. it's actually really good lol.
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 8 . 5/27/2017
THAT BROKE MY HEART OMG WOW THAT GOT REAL DARK REAL QUICK OMG
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 7 . 5/27/2017
this is actually kind of heartbreaking.

Like, the tone the fic has taken in the last couple of chapters have really been milking the angst for what it's worth.
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 6 . 5/27/2017
What appeared on the tv? Was Souji tap dancing? was he swimming? what happened?

CURIOSITY KILLED THE CAT BUT I AM NOT A CAT. NOT EVEN FELINE, FOR I AM A HOO-MAN AND A WOOO-MAN AT THAT.
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 5 . 5/27/2017
Okay. now im confused (again)

If Souji's already gotten his persona, doesnt that mean he doesn't have to face his shadow? Or is this like the Matrix, where nothing makes sense until the end and then it still doesnt make sense but u go along with it coz WHY NOT

Idk anymore. but i lovve the fic. gonna keep reading :D
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 4 . 5/27/2017
WHAT

WHAT EVEN

LIKE

WHAT

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I DONT UNDERSTAAAAAAANDDDDD~~~

THAT GOT SO REAL

SO SO FAST

...

WHAT
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 3 . 5/27/2017
I'm curious why Dojima would make Souji take 2 weeks off school...

Like, my carer is doting, but she makes me go to school because she knows its a distraction for me more than a place i go to learn. To Souji, this seems to be the case as well. Is it because Dojima doesn't fully understand that, or is it because Dojima was innocently worried that the stress of exams would compound onto Souji?

Lol I've been thinking about this since Dojima said it.
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 2 . 5/27/2017
SHIT GOT REAL REAL FAST lol omg this is great
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
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I legit just came out of reading "White Noise" so I'm actually really concerned for Souji.

WAIT A SECOND

WAIT JUST A MARSHMALLOW OF A SECOND

IS THIS A CONTINUATION OF WHITE NOISE? LIKE, WAS THERE A MIDDLE FIC I WAS MEANT TO READ TO GET UP TO THIS POINT?

Omg if there was I'm gonna hit myself or something. I'll feel terrible for not reading it T-T
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