A very enjoyable read. Thank you. Somehow I could imagine Severus having some trouble with the Patronus Charm.

However, have you ever considered giving Lily a different form for her Patronus? Having a doe seems to imply that she would be the mate of James, or is this a one sided SEv/Lily fic?

Sweet

Awww, little Severus is so cute! Nice job.

Sweet. :)

Love this!

This has the potential to be really touching. It was touching, and there were no obvious writing mistakes, it just ended a bit quickly in my oppinion.

I really enjoy Lily/Sev stories. Especially when they were still friends.