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sweet story... nice was so cute whan he talked about how much he loved his baby:)

I don't think you should have used fuck or any knok offs of the word i know it was your story and spin off of twilight but I think it would have sounded a lot better if Edward was pure (I mean he never swears in the books or movies it's just not him).

I love it. Defenitely a hit! Edward's so sweet. How I wish I had someone like him (doesn't everyone?;))

Thats really good! Please can you read and review my story taking chances xx

Whoa... that was intense! and sad... but really good! I actually thought Bella was gonna die for a second there too... so it was a hit! :)

its good...but i think it needs some more background info on edward and bella and dah other guys

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