Maybe the three chapters are good

lol sowwy about yur internet but at least u can post now!

lol that was soo postin more chapters!

You're welcome! If you need anything, be free to ask me. Anyway, I'm glad you're still trying to update this story and I do hope you'll write more about Eriol, it feels like he's being ignored. Poor Eriol. x) Keep it up and good luck!

Raposa do Deserto - Desert Fox.

XD

Meilin flying outta no where!

Humm... If you want to say something that's in the story then instea of putting parentheses, how about doing it like this?

Blah blah cookies(1) blah

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AN:

(1) I loveith cookies!

You know?

ANyways, I like your plot. Is very interesting. A very good first ficcy~

It was nice, but you really should try to write more. I like your story, but you always cut it when things are starting to get interesting and when you update I kind of don't know where I begin reading and all of these are because of these "cuts". Anyway, keep it up, because this fic promises! )

Much better! I found this chapter very humorous and although Sakura was a bit out of character her behaviour does leave you wondering what is bothering her. Your description of the party left a bit to be desired but it was interesting. I hope to see more chapters.

Has some was some what short. When you update I will know.

Not terrible

Good

hmm... well, i'm looking foward to read the next chapter... i hope it would be longer maybe