| Reviews for The Crystal |
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creepydollgirl chapter 8 . 4/5/2011 i loved it your a good writer i enjoyed reading it. it was really good. ~creepydollgirl~ |
Kella chapter 8 . 8/1/2010 "Look, you're nice and all, but I need you to stop being such a cockblock. I'm out bitches." "I guess I can respect that." -.- No. That scene failed. I'd have been all "BIZNACH! Ohw heyaall naw. Weez been plannin dis shizz foeva! Weez alwreadi payed fo dis shizz! Getcho curvy waterwhippin azz back in here!" Other than that, it was nice. But too... IDK. Not real. Aang wouldn't leave because some sonofabyatch tried to touch katara. Naw. |
Kella chapter 8 . 8/1/2010 "Look, you're nice and all, but I need you to stop being such a cockblock. I'm out bitches." "I guess I can respect that." -.- No. That scene failed. I'd have been all "BIZNACH! Ohw heyaall naw. Weez been plannin dis shizz foeva! Weez alwreadi payed fo dis shizz! Getcho curvy waterwhippin azz back in here!" Other than that, it was nice. But too... IDK. Not real. Aang wouldn't leave because some sonofabyatch tried to touch katara. Naw. |
alyson chapter 8 . 8/1/2010 the ending is eactly like the ending of sabrina the teenage witch... |
Catluvur chapter 8 . 7/30/2010 Awww...I don't really support Kataang but this was so cute! |
trangnha chapter 8 . 7/30/2010 nice story i love how you made it but i would have liked it in da different angle though but eithier way great story |
FutureAirbender18 chapter 8 . 7/29/2010 Oh snap! Together they turned WHITE! AHHHHHHH! That's true L.O.V.E. right there fools! Aha! *sigh* this story ended perfectly. :) Absolutely perfect. *sigh again* I'm so happy to have been a part of this trek as you made the chapters, it was such a thrill waiting and then never being satisfied until the end. And now... wowsers. I feel sad that's it's over... but so stinkin' happy that they are TOGETHER nowwwwww! Ahaha! oh, and thanks for the little tid bit at the end. ;) I mean every word I give on reviews. No lie! :D Hope to see you with another story out soon, because are an amazingly wonderful writer and I get hooked on your stories from the beginning! |
Pinkgurl14 chapter 8 . 7/29/2010 Aww...very cute! Great job! |
RavenMcBride chapter 7 . 7/2/2010 Well, now you decide to leave me hangin. thanx a lot! But it is REALLY GOOD! And thts why you have to update... ~Beccy98 |
FutureAirbender18 chapter 7 . 7/2/2010 Like I said in an earlier review. If he had just swallowed his pride and came back we would have lots o little Aang and katara babies running around. :D Good ol' Toph, she really knows what she's doing huh? Haha. Anyways, I sure hope to see more of this story soon. Hint hint. :) Glad to hear Katara is confused as ever, and that she still loves our wonderful Avatar. yeyeyeyeyeye! *sigh* See you on your next chapter. |
FutureAirbender18 chapter 6 . 7/2/2010 Aw man! He's not even hurt by her saying she's getting married! What in the world Aang! have you no sense of feelings! BUH. I'm glad she trusted him enough to cry into his shoulder, but... it just wasn't satisfying enough. They NEED to meet again and he needs to corner and just completely enchant her with his smooth talking and and maybe even a few kisses and make her realize that she has been bottling up all these feelings for him all these years and needs to give into want. AUGH! Sorry... I've been away for a while and need to vent my frustrations a little. Hee hee. But hey! FutureAirbender18 is back baby! Get ready for more of my rambling if you dare. GO AANG! GO get Katara! XD |
FutureAirbender18 chapter 5 . 7/2/2010 AUGH! Way to go! GAH! Oh well, I guess you just have to make it harder for Aang anyways... I mean... why not. UGH! I'm going to read the next chapter now. :) |
Kimjuni2 chapter 7 . 7/2/2010 Ahh i love it, great job again! |
CalleighB chapter 7 . 7/1/2010 I love the name of the chapter and I love that she gave him the crystal to prove their love. More, please. |
trangnha chapter 7 . 7/1/2010 Man I love this story! This is a great story I love how Toph is givin advice to both like a double agent its good keep goin! |