Supremely Different Theory Than The Permanent Sticking Charm In Canon. I Much Enjoyed It. An Amazing Chapter.

Sweet Jealous Remus. And I Wish Someone Would Punch Snape. Only Remus Would Be So Cool To Stop Time. I Love Your Remus

It Is Usually Love At First Sight For Tonks In Fanfiction ,Glad You Are Doing Something Different, But Poor Remus

Very nice. i was slightly more than shocked to see Sirius wandering the streets of London. I am not so surprised that no one recognized him, after all if he isn;t currently a threat why bother remembering what the MASS MURDERER looks like. People today... I loved Remus and sirius and the map. Just like they are back at school. very nice chapter, as always i eagerly await more!

you better continue this story don't think i could live without knowing what happens at the end... jks hahaha but seriously...

I really like you story so far I hope you update soon! XD

I like this it was very accurate , to me thats is.

It's only chapter one and i love the story o far! XD

Really good chapter. i liked hearing the death eaters secret plans, weird that Leohnid was there. It's cool to see Faran again and as a person this time. Interesting that he is a metamorphmagus as well. i wasn't expecting that. t would be a good way to recognise people though. Great job I look forward to he next one!

It's been annoying me this whole chapter so while I think this is really good, I'm going to have to point out you have been spelling Surrey wrong.. it just looks wrong as Surry.

Very enjoyable chapter, full of interesting new things. I wonder if Tonks and Faran will meet. Well done.

Nice twist... Didn't see it coming. Love your writing too. It is very well done. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter. the beginnign was nice. i liked hown tonks can feek the difference in remus before a full moon. though I'm sure rems doesn;t like the idea of it showing. The fight was really well done. You write action very well, i find it very difficult. Great chapter I look forward to more!

Maybe I read it wrong but you seem to have got your dates wrong. The lestranges and crouch junior were arrested shortly after boldemorts's downfall in 1981, but here you've got it haPpening in 1990. It says so during the pensieve discussion in book four, and Neville tells the fellOw gryffindors at the welcoming feast (book 1) that he was 'raised by his granfmother'.
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Woohoo! Remus and Tonks finnaly did it. I'm surprised sirius didn;t walk in while they were doing it. i wouldn't put it oast him. Great chapter. i liked having a little lightheartedness in there. Well done!