This is so cute!.

Did manage to catch this on the link,
It's a lovely piece, your formatting there just reinforced your pacing well. I didn't find it as distracting as I'd initially thought I was, as that styling I'm only used to in poetry, but you've incorporated it well. :)

i loved this so much. i did read it on the link, and i loved how it was all set out.

Awesome story:)

awesome

loved this story... it's refreshingly original :)

Hey, again

Well I tried reading this on livejournal but the stupid, crappy notebook I was using wasnt having none of that so I had to read it here but I liked the fic all the same. I have read two of your fics so far and I have to say you have a gift I really felt for Bella and her attempts to talk to Jake but I also felt for Jake and that fact that he soooo didnt want to talk about it.

I also have to mention Quil he slays me sometimes! The things he comes out with lol.

Deanie

This is a little bit strange but fascinating. Good work. Keep it up.

I read this on LJ like you aksed and it is my favorite piece by you. I love what you did with the formatting there, the story builds so much tension, I could hardly wait to get through it to figure out what what going on. I love how you compare Bella handing over the strawberries to handing over her heart... and so much more. Maybe when Im not at work I'll have time to do a proper point by point review. A beautiful oneshot.

Bittersweet and artistic, like dark chocolate melted across a white page in soft swirls and jaggeded strokes... Thank you for taking me there with you, it was a beautiful experience.

AWWWW! Ok, I read it at LJ so I got the awesome formatting and everything. Wonderful work! Loved it!

Amazing one-shot! :)

i loved it! great job! )

Oh my God, I love this so, so, so much. I can't even describe how it made me feel, I can't put it into words, it was just amazing. You did a wonderful job.

Oh my gosh...unbelievably sweet. At first I was like, where the hell is this going? I'm confused, but of course, I just had to keep reading for it all to make sense. I love Jake's/your algae eater/fish tank analogy. LOL A great read, thanks!