Reviews for Love, Actually |
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L chapter 1 . 3/15 this is so cute i know its been Years since u wrote it but id like to say that it is the cutest thing ever in the world |
Frazel2 chapter 1 . 11/16/2019 aw! |
MyBlueSky chapter 1 . 3/19/2019 This is like 9 years old but I just have to say this was written so well and is so cute! One thing that I really really liked was this simple phrase "…[she] cleared her throat, glancing down at the papers in front of her and shuffling through them carefully". Maybe I sound crazy, but this conveyed so many of Annabeth's emotions to me without her saying anything and gave me a clear picture to visualize. So many fanfic writers fail to describe body language, and will switch POVs just to explain what's going on in someone's head when actions really do speak louder than words. It's a really tricky skill to learn. Anyway, that made me really happy :) |
StarlingChild4 chapter 1 . 5/24/2018 Simple, cute, and sweet :) Love this! I must confess, at first I was confused by the nature of their relationship. But then I remembered that people can care about each other, be attracted to each other, and not necessarily be "in love" (yet). It's actually kind of refreshing that you wrote Percy's confession after they had already been together a while (so it seems), rather than a confession leading to them dating. Well done! |
Forever-Fangirl-PJO chapter 1 . 5/6/2018 This is adorable! |
mycomfortblanket chapter 1 . 8/15/2016 loved this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2016 KEJCJVUDOSNCJCKXKXKCOSKDB! ITS SO CUTE! *INTENSE HAND FLAPPING* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! |
Nico15 chapter 1 . 3/6/2016 Absolutely LOVE IT |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2015 I absoultely love your writing. Do not stop writing! ~Kayla_Gabby |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2015 Awesome. :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 CRIES IN HAPPINESS THAT WAS BEAUTY |
IWasNeverReal chapter 1 . 10/20/2014 It has to be the boxers. It's always the boxers. |
Molly chapter 1 . 10/9/2014 That is so adorable |
Mamas chapter 1 . 8/5/2014 This so reminds me of she looks so perfect! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2014 FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW |