NICE!

Somehow, I am still lost. I really have no idea what exactly is going on with Naruto, and the idea that he has both a mental and physical condition seems unusual. Still, this chapter was written very well, and I do look forward to more.

Granted that I feel it was the Third that made sure that Naruto received that "mission" to "wake him up" to the real world, I find that it could have come at a later time. Preferably him on a team, performing that mission together. Even if Naruto had to be the one to end the guys life, the guilt could have been evenly distributed among the three gennin.

Besides that point, the story is awesome. Until your next update. Later.

This is a great story. I hope you update soon. :)

This is getting good please update soon.

WOW!

that's an interesting way to graduate. i guess the change in focus will drastically change the dynamic of how the village is run. sounds interesting. i hope you get around to updating the next chapter soon.

WHOAH! EPIC, DUDE!

This si good please continue.

That was on purpose and I know it. Damn you Hiruzen and the other people who assign this mission. This will scar Naruto for life.

This chapter is definatly the worst of the two, but I love the overall concept. Could the child that witnessed her father's death be an opponant of Naruto in the future perhaps?

WHOAH!

Hey this is good please continue to update I want to find out what naruto have to kill.

Nice beginning. Write some more.