Reviews for Mine
reicheruchan chapter 4 . 6/29/2018
Love the pairing! I love how protective Hakkai is! Is there gonna be another chapter?
VampireAngel4Life chapter 4 . 1/2/2016
OMFG XDDDD SHES SUCH A BOSS LOL
VampireAngel4Life chapter 3 . 1/2/2016
awww this is so adorable omg
VampireAngel4Life chapter 2 . 1/2/2016
Awwww baka saru ehem i mean Goku is really smart XDDDDDDD i really LIKED this chapter like omg
VampireAngel4Life chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
goku and hakkai are just XDDD geez
Shyeraun chapter 3 . 11/28/2014
Oh dear God in heaven, I'd forgotten how beautifully written this was! it's been around two years since i read it last i think, yet my love for this story has not diminished one bit. i feel there are parts of this that could flow better but i'm afraid i'm too visual to go through and tell you where it could be improved - i get lost in the imagery and emotions too easily! your writing is a gem and i pray that you never give up as this story clearly shows your love and passion for writing in every word. Your heart is in this piece.
Shidou chapter 4 . 10/31/2013
lol...nice and cute! I like it :3
Shidou chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
AWWWW this is so cute, SO CUTE!
I really love the idea Hakkai and Goku sharing Sanzo, but absolutely killing everything that comes near. The near animal instinct is very interesting and raw, if you know what I mean XD
Dancing Phoenix chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
i loved this. the ending was awesome with the whole sanzo turning around to face hakkai's shirt... made me laugh and giggle. good job on a great story... _
Guest chapter 4 . 9/30/2012
This is THE best hakkai/sanzo fic i have ever read. Thank you for an amazingly good read.
Kasia-chan chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
It was a real pleasure reading this story. -

And since I'm quite perverted and love to read about Sanzo having his behind molested I'm hoping for more...? *-*

Either way, I liked the idea of having Hakkai claim Sanzo. - I just love it when Hakkai goes all youkai on Sanzo. ;)

I also loved the idea of having Sanzo grow his hair. - I want to see him in hair at least half the length of Konzen. -

Write a second part? *-*
Larkfall chapter 4 . 2/6/2012
Great Story, it's both interesting and very well written.
Illustrioustaco chapter 4 . 1/26/2012
X3 that was almost TOO cute. I liked it though :3
singlemompride chapter 4 . 10/30/2011
ahhh so cute! i want more! is there more? or will my imagination have to go to work? hehe
chookee choco chapter 4 . 12/28/2010
i really like the plot you had going there! i think this opens new doors for more fics :

as for a few typo's, Goku's line delivery, and maybe Hakkai's OOCness during angry mode, it was compensated for treating the story line well.

no doubt your characterization will improve after more fics *hint hint* ahaha!

thanks for this! it was a great read
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