| Reviews for Mine |
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reicheruchan chapter 4 . 6/29/2018 Love the pairing! I love how protective Hakkai is! Is there gonna be another chapter? |
VampireAngel4Life chapter 4 . 1/2/2016 OMFG XDDDD SHES SUCH A BOSS LOL |
VampireAngel4Life chapter 3 . 1/2/2016 awww this is so adorable omg |
VampireAngel4Life chapter 2 . 1/2/2016 Awwww baka saru ehem i mean Goku is really smart XDDDDDDD i really LIKED this chapter like omg |
VampireAngel4Life chapter 1 . 1/2/2016 goku and hakkai are just XDDD geez |
Shyeraun chapter 3 . 11/28/2014 Oh dear God in heaven, I'd forgotten how beautifully written this was! it's been around two years since i read it last i think, yet my love for this story has not diminished one bit. i feel there are parts of this that could flow better but i'm afraid i'm too visual to go through and tell you where it could be improved - i get lost in the imagery and emotions too easily! your writing is a gem and i pray that you never give up as this story clearly shows your love and passion for writing in every word. Your heart is in this piece. |
Shidou chapter 4 . 10/31/2013 lol...nice and cute! I like it :3 |
Shidou chapter 1 . 10/30/2013 AWWWW this is so cute, SO CUTE! I really love the idea Hakkai and Goku sharing Sanzo, but absolutely killing everything that comes near. The near animal instinct is very interesting and raw, if you know what I mean XD |
Dancing Phoenix chapter 4 . 7/17/2013 i loved this. the ending was awesome with the whole sanzo turning around to face hakkai's shirt... made me laugh and giggle. good job on a great story... _ |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/30/2012 This is THE best hakkai/sanzo fic i have ever read. Thank you for an amazingly good read. |
Kasia-chan chapter 4 . 3/11/2012 It was a real pleasure reading this story. - And since I'm quite perverted and love to read about Sanzo having his behind molested I'm hoping for more...? *-* Either way, I liked the idea of having Hakkai claim Sanzo. - I just love it when Hakkai goes all youkai on Sanzo. ;) I also loved the idea of having Sanzo grow his hair. - I want to see him in hair at least half the length of Konzen. - Write a second part? *-* |
Larkfall chapter 4 . 2/6/2012 Great Story, it's both interesting and very well written. |
Illustrioustaco chapter 4 . 1/26/2012 X3 that was almost TOO cute. I liked it though :3 |
singlemompride chapter 4 . 10/30/2011 ahhh so cute! i want more! is there more? or will my imagination have to go to work? hehe |
chookee choco chapter 4 . 12/28/2010 i really like the plot you had going there! i think this opens new doors for more fics : as for a few typo's, Goku's line delivery, and maybe Hakkai's OOCness during angry mode, it was compensated for treating the story line well. no doubt your characterization will improve after more fics *hint hint* ahaha! thanks for this! it was a great read |