Loved it:) why are all your fanfics so awesome?!

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This isn't short. It's exactly the right length!

Awww!

I like it, it's so fluffy and adorable (like clouds!).

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Emerald: great she died... Now what are supposed to do?

Ruby: who knows and who cares?

Amethyst: the story was sooooo cute though!

Sapphire: why do you think she died, Am?

Amethyst: oh...

Ruby: don't worry, she'll wakeup soon...

Emerald: what do you mean soon? She's dead! Not sleeping!

Ruby: if she died then we would disappear! Duh!

Sapphire: wait, why is this all going into a review?

Ruby: cause Gemma-chan has no life.

Gemma: I do to!

Ruby: these are one of those "told yah so" moments...

Emerald: don't even start with me...

Gemma: anyways... I love this one! This one is soooo sweet! I love the whole clouds and love... Thing... I forget what it's called... ;-) well I'm tired and it's late so this is the last review you'll hear from me tonight... *yawn* night!

Everyone: good night!

Gemma-chan

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This was so carefree and adorableeee! I love the atmosphere this story portrays! :]

Hahaha when she mentioned the cumulonimbus cloud, it reminded me of that Pixar movie "Up"... have you ever seen it? xD

Aww. I loved the part from when they had to take shelter to the part where she kissed him on the cheek. That entire moment was wonderfully written.

And yeah! Everything seemed pretty spot-on. Like, they were in character, and I didn't notice any tense-changes or anything. Sooo awesome!

I'm totally checking out more of your stuff soon! _

fun~

but ... i dont remmber to study in science about clouds in that way -_-' maybe I'm failing in science just like rima

HAHA! CHICKEN! HAHAHA! hehe yeah srry bout that but i couldn't stop laughing at the chicken part for some reason (i am so immature), anyway, way this was super cute really cute nice job, like it tons especially how it ended with Rima kissing his cheeck and saying the metaphor and everything. Nice job once again, see ya

and you should aslo update your other story about the million dollar bet cough cough * just saying XDD

aww . that was soooo sweet ! :) it's always a nice idea to incorporate school with romance , isn't it ?

i dunno if it's just me , but i want a sequel . LMAO . yes , it's that good ! :D so if it's not so much trouble, will you make a sequel ? but that's upto you . :D

I loved it ~

Lizzie~Chan :)

I was so confused and curious when I saw the title, but now after reading this, I couldn't think of a better one. ]

So let me just say that this is THE CUTEST Rimahiko oneshot I've ever read! I'm not even kidding. Like, I want Peach-Pit to read this and then make a manga chapter out of it! It's that amazing. I'm favoriting it, and I'm definitely checking out more of your stuff in the future ]

The only thing I would say this could improve on is that I thought it ended a bit abruptly. Like, other than Nagihiko looking at her in shock, you have no real reaction from him after Rima tells him she loves him. It's like, she tells him and then she goes outside. And while having leaves tumbling down from the sky was AWESOME, 'cause of the whole deciduous thing, it did seem a tad bit rushed. Just pointing something out. ]

And I have a question. Are you making this a two-shot or something? Because you don't have it listed as "complete", so I was just wondering. I think having it as a two-shot would be cool too, because I'd love to see what else you can come up with... like Rima getting 100 on her test or something? I dunno. I love Rimahiko and this one-shot was so cute and I love it so much! D So I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation of it. Not at all. ]

AWWWWW THAT WAS SOOOOOOO CUTE! :D YAY! PLZ MAKE MORE :D

That was sweet and very cute! :) you did a terrific job, hiccup-chan!

haha, this was great! :3

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