In all honesty, I felt like the entire story so far was a little rushed. I love Kristen, though, and I love the plot you have here. The characterization is also great. So, no harm no foul. I hope you update soon because I would to see where you take the story from here.

I love this! update soon!

Very nice

hey i like this so far!

I think I like this. You'll be continuing, right? Well I sure hope so. That would make me very, very happy. Kristin seems like a faily likable character, too. That always helps with a story.

This is an intriguing beginning. I think that nobody could do better than to have Alfred as an adoptive father. I'm very interesting in seeing where you go with this.

oh snap! i like this so far!

(Gah, you made me log in... I'm so lazy... XD)

Ooooh! I would really like to see more of this. :) There aren't enough Alfred fics, I would love to see how you incorporate him! This is already looking good.

-Dots