Yep, that Toruk nearly had them for his lunch...

Ah, yes, the "marine" clan...

This is good, and I am still enjoying the "changes".

Well, this doesn't exactly follow what happened in the movie, but the charges are interesting, to say the least...

It's getting really interesting now, and I like the "changes"...

So far it's very good...I really like these fan stories, you are all so good at writing them!

Again, a few variations, but I'm still intrigued as to where this is going...

Well, so far, it's following the movie (more or less) but I sense that the difference of having Jake walking with working legs is going to make some interesting changes.,,,

I'm interested in finding out how Jake's being able to walk will affect the story...it's bound to do that somehow!

Keep going man, amazing work

i know its been a while since your last update, but i hope to see more soon.

Well...I have to be perfectly honest with you...This Story...IS AWESOME! I mean sure you misspelled some words, but still so far you are doing an great job, and also i like how you make it so Jake doesn't listen to Quaritch, although im really wondering how the scene at Home Tree will Play out differently.

Keep working hard.

Your Na'vi is a little flawed...but other then that this is an awesome story.

i hope jake is smart enough to know to not put information about the na'vi on his logs.

Nice update but when does Jake do the sabotage, in real life or in his Avatar?