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Hey great story, but you should write more Artemis/Hermes because the last time I checked you are the only one writing these.

Love The Story!

Hermes And Artemis need more LOVE!

Write another one. )) I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. :D

great! love this one too!

you're rock at writing about this pairing.

ARTEMIS/HERMES RULES!

*smiles* u've just made me a very hapy person. I luv the whole artemis/hermes thing ur doing

just a few pointers

u used store when it should be stared

in paragraph 1 u put artemis could remembering... It should be artemis could remeber.

A few other small minor things but otherwise i loved it! Update soon please!

~ArtemisFrimm

P.S. If u don't want to use the pjo board to post ur stories cuz of maybe slight oocness, then u could post it on the greek mythology board. Its under misc.

P.S.S. I 3 red jumpsuit apparatus!