this should have been canon

wtf. this was a great story. well researched medically, many details, bad guy got his ass kicked by a half blind Ryan.

perfect. *hits download*

Just reading this again... Still a great story, I remember the first time, waiting on each chapter to be posted. Thanks for sharing!

Oh. My. God. This chapter was amazing! The writing style of the internal monologue was breathtaking!

I enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed every one of your stories, which is a lot. Thanks for adding this chapter!

you know Miss author, this 30 chapter just going me crazy for sure!
reallly! i want to write much everything in this reviwe. i want you know how really i'm lucky to find this fic even though it's too late. 30 chapter made me don't want to sleep before i can finish every chapter you write. and feels like in rollercoster cuz your amazing plot just made me high up then down deep! but unfortunatelly my english jus so bad. i'm indonessian BTW. you know i really want to riviwe so much every damn (sorry) chapter that you write. :''( ah... so if you mind, maybe i will write not that long like in my mind. (your prolog reviwe it's already long enough damn, hehe.. sorry)

fristly, i doesn;t want to lie that i'm not reading 2 or 4 chapter, before Ryan met the culpirt. i just reading the whole chapter after Ryan meet Phelps. yes sorry about that, but seriuously, you made an amazing plot! amazing describe, i can see so clear when ryan scream painfully his eyes got damage. i can see how Calleigh and Jessie panic looking at his friend suffer.

then the next chapter, when ryan blind, for God sake! i.. i can know how he feel that you just got blind suddenly! but the most i can't stop calm while reading your fic is when phelps come to kill Ryan! aaaaakkk... i just greet my teeth, rolling on my carpet, don't want to read but then back reading again. scream internally "Horatioooooooooo! where are you! noooooo! Ryan! Wolfe!" and then shut my eyes rolling again to breath deep and calm my self.

the best part it's on surgery room! for God sake! i almost skip beat. i really can see how the surgery walking in deep situation. how his team depreatly try to calm their self! oh my God! i keep scream internally and rolling even sit and sleep, breath to calm my self. ah i really like riding roller coster!

and when that chapter you count down for Ryan breath. i greet my finger nail and just wish just like his team! aaahhh... that feeling you just make me made a journe that i can feel any feeling in this world!

you really succes made this fic! you really a great writter! you are amazing! absolutly briliant author! i really wis you become the CSI miami writter if that show back. though my wis is just wish. but really if this fic can be an episode, though i hope it's become 4 episode. it'll be great episode ever! :D

and the last, thanks you for writting this fanfic, thank you for made me riding roller coster imagination in every snetences every words, every chapter, thank you thank you so mush! i wanna hug you! :3
ah i don't wanna forget this feeling you know. i really wanna read another fanfic like this. and then sorry for reviwe so long and full of my carp rumbleling. haha... it's because i love your fic so much that i can't handle to write this reviwe. ah i love you! i really love you that you give me wonderful fanfic and feeling. thanks and sorry that the two words i just can give you. :')

regards: Hell13

this was a very interesting story. i loved it. poor ryan. i am glad he and walter made up.

This was an amazing story and I just love it. Thanks for a great read.

great story!

I loved your use of medical stuff in this chapter!

I first read this story about a year ago and it must have stuck in the back of my head because I recently had a daydream about it. I seriously thought it was a real episode and searched the Internet for it. It seemed so clearly pictured that I was sure it was an episode. Well after reading all the episode descriptions my second thought was to search fanfic. I so enjoyed reading this, again! Great job on this, I do hope there will be some new Ryab whump from you!

HALLELUJAH! He lives! Good because I would have been extremely upset if he didn't.
You're a really great writer, your descriptions and writing style work really well.

This was a wonderful ending, well done XD xxx

I totally adored this story! your an awesome writer!

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