A powerful tale.

Those who like Hiashi should understand that *this* version is a sick, evil monster and should not be regarded in the same breath as a better version.

Those that abuse and kill children (especially their own) should burn in Hell.

It's just that simple.

Loved it

nice story

Just wanted to tell you that your story made me bawl my eyes out. I love this song but it always makes me cry and this story fits it so perfectly. Thank you. :')

Poor Hinata and Hanabi. Great short story, and I enjoyed reading it despite the sad ending.

this was so sad. i cried. i love this.

Well that was a real tearjerker. Also, this was a very well written one-shot. You could actually make this into an actually story from this one-shot if you really wanted to

A nicely written and very emotional one shot.

Good short story, nice twist in the end. I will be looking foward to reading your other works.

THAT WAS SO... SO...BEUTIFULL! *START CRYING LIKE A BABY*

deep, emotionally filled, and very well written

...A real tearjerker. I'm not saying that sarcastically either. You have a good way of depicting this type of situation.

Wow...that was depressing. But very well written.(_)

You have real talent for finding cool songs to make songfics out of. (_) I'm (as usual) listening to the song the songfic was written to. I really like Concrete Angel. But somehow, when I say the title of the song I thought it was gonna be read by a dude.

Loved it! Really sad ending tho'. *sob*

poor hanabi chan!

Great story! This was nice to read. Thanks for writing this. God bless!