| Reviews for Marriage in the Sand |
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  Narami chapter 29 . 2/27 Thank you so much fro writing this! |
 OstaraNight chapter 18 . 2/24 This was recommended to me by a friend and I see why! I'm partway through (okay maybe farther than that, but I got pulled into reading and didn't review sooner) and love so much about it. I like the slow build and the different plot parts and characters. So, thank you for sharing and I'm so excited to read the rest! Really enjoying this! |
| orca285 chapter 28 . 1/28 I have re read this story so many times I lost count! That's how much I love it! Thanks you. Would you ever consider writing a continuation story after the epilogue or another fic on the time between hinata pregnancy to the ending of this story? I hope you do. |
| Chrisstars1 chapter 29 . 1/3 Loved the story! |
| Bluewarrior3 chapter 20 . 8/5/2019 i do feel bad for aiko but even still it’s hard to like someone when there being really rude and cold. Gaara and hinata are becoming closer it’s soo sweet |
| Bluewarrior3 chapter 18 . 8/5/2019 I’m on ch.18..and I have to say that Aiko is a bitch..you really should have made hinata snap at her. I’m still reading tho. Your story is good so far |
| callionope chapter 2 . 4/15/2019 I love how strong Hinata is. |
| callionope chapter 1 . 4/15/2019 I have read your story so many times already but I never get bored nor sick of it. This is absolutely amazing and again, I will read this. This story always gives me excitement. You're an amazing writer. |
| KookiePie1025 chapter 29 . 3/8/2019 Lovely lovely story! One of the best I’ve read so far! |
| masterlysheep chapter 26 . 1/18/2019 I'm starting to feel a little sad for Hinata. I do understand how Gaara think but he need to meet her half way. She is the only one making efferts and the last part was a little bit to close to rape in my opinion. Hinata is best girl and Gaara needs tk treat her more like a person and not an object. I believe that your vision on marriage in Naruto is not wrong because it kind of feel like women in naruto are either shinobi or baby makers but I do feel like your pushing it a little to an other note, I love your writting style and the way you describ is like I'm there with the characters. |
| masterlysheep chapter 20 . 1/16/2019 I think I like Aiko, just not with Kiba. I know they are going to be end game but I don't ship it. It seem they bring out the worst in eachother together... Hinata flirting is giving me life. |
| masterlysheep chapter 18 . 1/15/2019 I don't like Aiko at all... |
| masterlysheep chapter 10 . 1/14/2019 My heart! I really am loving this slow burn. |
| masterlysheep chapter 9 . 1/14/2019 This is hurting me so much...Poor Hinata and Gaara...Gaara needs to open up more or this will never work. |
| masterlysheep chapter 8 . 1/14/2019 I'm liking this story a lot. I love how realistic their first time is. Gaara is going to have to work harder on those skills XD. |
