It's nice to see you writing another Finder fanfiction. I think yours are some of the best. This story has really left an impression. It's sad in the way that Akihito loves Asami, but won't admit it in fear when Asami's pretty much waiting for him to confess because he cares for Akihito. o_O Whoa. Sorry for the confusing run-on. However, my point is that you set the mood perfectly and even though sad, at the same time it's sweet. I especially love your ending. You did great! 3 And as much as I love your Death Note stories, I really hope that you find inspiration to write another Finder one.

Good interpretation of what happened after Akihito came back from Hong Kong. Well written and the interplay between the two was spot on when it comes to their individual characters.

This is frigging amazing and so hot, Sueona-san! I really like how Akihito thinks that he should stay fierce and wild so Asami wouldn't lose interest in him and the ending was simply epic! I just hope there was a second chapter but I think having this as a one-shot is much better.:D

Waaaaaa I suffered a little but let me tell you something, I loved your fic ;) and the heartfelt emotions are sooooooo good.

This is part of what I think could be a between these two D. I hope you keep writing fics with this cute couple.

xoxox

wow awesome fic. its good 2 finally read from u again. i love ur finder fics the most hope 2 read from u again

Ah such sweet loving!