Really well amde story. You should make a part 2, where Ali is older and legal.

Wow! This was amazing... Extra hot, in character and in a perfect tempo.

I simply loved it. You've captured her innocence and mischief so well. I had a wonderful time reading your fic.

Thank you!

Wow, that was very good and sweet.. House taken Ali's virginity and the way he was with her was very good...

*fans self* hot damn! well written friend

whoa. this was GOOD.

I remember the situation, but I'm gonna have to rewatch this episode (title?season?) to refresh my memory regarding the character dynamics/chemistry. Can't really see Ali hunting House down at home (fantasizing about, sure, don't we all?), but if she did, I can see House finally agreeing to the one kiss - but not taking it any further. However, accepting that scenario, you did a very good job with it; House certainly wasn't taking advantage of Ali, and it was sexy as hell to read!

great to finally see another fic with this pairing.

it's funny to note that house made that diagnosis up, it wasn't true and he knew it, he just wanted to get rid of her... which just follows Ali really was in love with him.

i hope you won't leave it with just this chapter, but that you will continue it and write more on this!