Hey, loved the first chapter. This was so good. See, I rarely find fic's that focus on Washu and yours does that very, VERY well. You're so boss! I gotta see what happens next!

Raging Lion

Beautiful story, you're very talented.

oh yes, i really really love this. truely amazing. I love Washu and i love angst, as long as it isnt too sappy. this is by far the single best tenchi fic i ve read in this entire site,and i have read quite a good amount.

now excuse me while i read your other fics

Wow...I'm actually crying. Stories don't usually make me cry, but this one has caused the tears to just stream down my face.

I read this entire story in one sitting, not able to go without reading the next chapter. I even started playing "The Last Unicorn" once it was mentioned during the story and I've been playing non-stop while reading.

I love this story so much. The emotions, the events, they're all so captivating. I was in tears when Washu gave her life for Ryoko. I was even begging Washu to come back.

I don't think I've ever read a story that's drawn me into it so much. This fanfiction is remarkable! I'm so glad you brought Washu back! She's my favorite character and it made me so sad when she died.

You should be very proud of this story. I know I would be if I were you.

~Lord KaioShin

Aweome story! I love your writing. Please write a bunch more. Washu is my favorite characters and so is Ryoko. More please?

Wow! That was absolutely great. As can be proved by the stone cold pizza that has been left untouched for the past two hours. Having the last chapter wrap it all up and get everyone back to normal is something that happens in almost every cartoon, anime or series - very professional. Keep up the great work!

That was great story! I loved it. I read it everyday. Keep it up with more stories.

*sniffles* I loved this fic. Washu is the best Tenchi person in my book and I loved how you made her a goddess. I loved itysy bitsy Ryoko-chan! She loved Unicorns and her "mommy". It was also great how mde Washu love her uncoditionly even when she was agoddess. Write more please like the origins of the three sisters and how Washu left!

I loved the entire story, especially the parts with Ryoko as a baby and Washu as Lily. Hope you make another story soon! Keep up the good work!

a bit confusing. but still good! it's not your fault i'm as smart as a paper clip. -sees a yo-yo- OOO! JA NE!

-runs off to play with yo-yo-

~Washu, Princess of the Monkeys~

if thats just a clone of Washu then she can't revort to her goddess form any right or does she still posses that abillity and is Tokimi truely trapped in those gems because in chapter 8 i think, Washu said that Tokimi needs to know what it feels like to be a human and said that Jurai would be a perfect place for her and it shows her disapear so the question is, does she live as a Jurian or not and if so will you write a side story about her life as a Jurian?

oh yeah and this is a five star story and tell me have you ever heard of aikian muyo which is just as good just without the sex

Wow, that was good, very very good...It's sad that its almost drawing to a close but it's great. I absolutely love the way this story is turning out.

WAY TO GO! You did an excellent job on this fic! Write more stories and don't forget to read my stuff 2!

-LilWashuChan

Wow. This was by far your best story yet. I must say that i did enjoy the happy ending opposed to what you could have done. Great job and keep up the good work.

Okay... Lemme get this straight. YOU FRIGGIN MADE HAVE TO PUT FLOODSIGNS THROUGH THE WHOLE BLOCK! I've been crying my butt off over this story! And gaddamn, you're a wonderful writer, this is the kind of author I wanna be when I grow up and get a job. Personally, I liked the first four five chapters better, cause I luv crying my ass off over dramatic stories like these! Lets see, made me cry about ::counts fingers over and over:: bout seven times, and that's a really hard thing to do! I don't cry very often. You set up the plot beautifully, and Ryoko as a baby, it was just.. just, HEAVEN! My little sister was EXACTLY like that. Whooie, getting a little melodramatic there... Anyhoo, this story was the reason fanfiction was made. Shame there aren't more fics like yours, but there's enough... somewhere... out there.